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RaulXD
RaulXDLv44yr
2020-11-29 08:57

/(+-+)/ te mando todas mis energías para que salgan más capitulos. cuando llegues a las 15 k palabras estoy seguro que se volverá más popular tu novelas, así que continua.

In Bleach with a System!

KindaWeirdChampBro
4.7
36 Chs

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KindaWeirdChampBro
KindaWeirdChampBroAuthor

Soy nuevo en este sitio, en que afecta a una novela no llegar a las 15k? :( Gracias por la review. ♡

4yr
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RaulXD
RaulXDLv4

Recién en ese momento te ponen en la clasificación para el ranking, ya que aunque te den 100 piedras de poder( el conteo de piedras que se renuevan semanalmente dónde se hace un ranking, y el que tiene mayor se posiciona en el puesto mas altos, y te lo recomienda el mismo webnovel para aumentar tus lectores) no valdrá. Se recomienda que cuando llegues a los 15 k de palabras sea un domingo, ya que desde ese día acumuladas piedras de poder, y así aumentar tu ranking. También se recomienda que subas tu capitulo un poco antes de las 11 AM ya que a esa hora se renuevan las piedras de poder de los lectores. También existen métodos más oscuros para clasificarte y para que tu novela ya entre al ranking, pero te podría costar el puntaje de tu novela, así que con calma llega a los 15 k palabras y continua.

4yr
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KindaWeirdChampBro
KindaWeirdChampBroAuthor

Gracias. :) No entendia que significaban esas piedras jaja. No hay problema igual, estoy contento con la cantidad de lectores que ya tengo!

RaulXD:Recién en ese momento te ponen en la clasificación para el ranking, ya que aunque te den 100 piedras de poder( el conteo de piedras que se renuevan semanalmente dónde se hace un ranking, y el que tiene mayor se posiciona en el puesto mas altos, y te lo recomienda el mismo webnovel para aumentar tus lectores) no valdrá. Se recomienda que cuando llegues a los 15 k de palabras sea un domingo, ya que desde ese día acumuladas piedras de poder, y así aumentar tu ranking. También se recomienda que subas tu capitulo un poco antes de las 11 AM ya que a esa hora se renuevan las piedras de poder de los lectores. También existen métodos más oscuros para clasificarte y para que tu novela ya entre al ranking, pero te podría costar el puntaje de tu novela, así que con calma llega a los 15 k palabras y continua.
4yr
RaulXD
RaulXDLv4

Tienes mucho potencial, pocas novelas tienen tantos comentarios en los primeros capítulos. Y realmente me gustaría ver a una novela quitarle el primer puesto al actual líder

KindaWeirdChampBro:Gracias. :) No entendia que significaban esas piedras jaja. No hay problema igual, estoy contento con la cantidad de lectores que ya tengo!
4yr
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