I am the half brother of Meredith Grey

I really like this story so far can't wait to see where it goes

Has promise. Its good so far. Give me more hehehe

5/2/2/5/4. Kinda neat, MC gets his identity wiped, only he didn't.. just his name and his family members. Gets isekaid into a 14 year old in a mix world of Grey's anatomy and iCarly but the poor bas*ard is too mentally old to date someone his physical age and too physically young to date someone his mental age so he gets to die alone haha. Also random Deb from Dexter just to have a cameo? Honestly could have been better if he had his past life's emotions wiped or just gave knowledge to the original Lucas but now we have this awkward mix. Can't recommend the fic really but it's not garbage enough for me to dissuade readers

I read the first 11 chapters of your web novel and have some ideas. Overall I think it has potential, but there are a few areas that could be improved. First, I think you should be more enthusiastic about the topic you are writing about (I wrote more detailed). it would reflect in your words and make the story more engaging to the reader. Second, I think you need to develop your characters more. Right now, the main character doesn't seem to have much depth or personality. He just goes through the motions without really thinking about what he's doing. I think if you gave the character more of a backstory and motivation it would make it more relatable and interesting to the reader. Overall, I think your webnovel has potential, but it needs some work. If you can improve the writing style, character development, and pacing, I think you'll have a great story on your hands.

It’s good but his boons were unexp ected and the author just needs to ad more chaps

Around 7-10 chapters of intro that told us absolutely nothing... What was your objective here??? .....................................................

I love the dexter series, I can't wait to see what a relationship and being dexter's brother-in-law will give... oula, on the other hand, the icarly series is of a completely different genre from grey/dexter, it's above all humor can't wait to see how you're going to include this universe in your story... and "suit" I don't care a bit (sorry)

I love the story and have been patiently waiting for an update

I actually loved it but it looks like it's been dropped so no real reason to read it unless you are just really desperate...

is there romance?

really wish they didnt drop this.........

Read up to date, kinda binge read it. It's good, has a lot of potential. Hopefully it doesn't get dropped.

I have watched Grey’s Anatomy and only stopped after they killed “Mcdreamy” and I will be honest I didn’t think anybody wrote a fanfic of it on here. I found this story because I wanted something new to read and I have to admit that it is one of my favorite books so far! I hope you keep on writing more because I would like to see where it goes from here!

now i have to wait another chapter, sheesh. love u work author.

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Love the this fanfiction it made me cry the first few chapters but good crying. The W,S,S,C, and World Background is awesome thanks for the fanfiction I will continue to reading this fanfiction from now and into the future

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a slow pace is fine but I feel that 10 of the chapters didn't provide anything