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FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv41yr
2023-07-18 12:52

5/2/2/5/4. Kinda neat, MC gets his identity wiped, only he didn't.. just his name and his family members. Gets isekaid into a 14 year old in a mix world of Grey's anatomy and iCarly but the poor bas*ard is too mentally old to date someone his physical age and too physically young to date someone his mental age so he gets to die alone haha. Also random Deb from Dexter just to have a cameo? Honestly could have been better if he had his past life's emotions wiped or just gave knowledge to the original Lucas but now we have this awkward mix. Can't recommend the fic really but it's not garbage enough for me to dissuade readers

I am the half brother of Meredith Grey

Support_Five
4.5
29 Chs

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Dan_Stone
Dan_StoneLv4

I really like this story so far can't wait to see where it goes

1yr

Daoistj6NsTh
Daoistj6NsThLv2

Has promise. Its good so far. Give me more hehehe

1yr
DreuxX
DreuxXLv14

I read the first 11 chapters of your web novel and have some ideas. Overall I think it has potential, but there are a few areas that could be improved. First, I think you should be more enthusiastic about the topic you are writing about (I wrote more detailed). it would reflect in your words and make the story more engaging to the reader. Second, I think you need to develop your characters more. Right now, the main character doesn't seem to have much depth or personality. He just goes through the motions without really thinking about what he's doing. I think if you gave the character more of a backstory and motivation it would make it more relatable and interesting to the reader. Overall, I think your webnovel has potential, but it needs some work. If you can improve the writing style, character development, and pacing, I think you'll have a great story on your hands.

1yr
Godkinhdhfrhdgg
GodkinhdhfrhdggLv4

It’s good but his boons were unexp ected and the author just needs to ad more chaps

1yr
Pythia
PythiaLv11

Around 7-10 chapters of intro that told us absolutely nothing... What was your objective here??? .....................................................

1yr
Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv11

I love the dexter series, I can't wait to see what a relationship and being dexter's brother-in-law will give... oula, on the other hand, the icarly series is of a completely different genre from grey/dexter, it's above all humor can't wait to see how you're going to include this universe in your story... and "suit" I don't care a bit (sorry)

1yr
Kaheem_Edmonds
Kaheem_EdmondsLv4

I love the story and have been patiently waiting for an update

1yr
BryndenRivers
BryndenRiversLv12

I actually loved it but it looks like it's been dropped so no real reason to read it unless you are just really desperate...

1yr
God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14

is there romance?

1yr
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