How to be a Shadow

The beginning was abrupt but as soon as it developed, it became a thriller. It was nothing I thought of. It's better than I imagined. The plot is strong, characters are well built, dialogues are in good flow and the setting is pretty cool too. keep up the good work. you are doing great.

little fast paced but everything went from 0 to 100 real quick! didn't expect a novel that was initially in my eyes a 2/5 to become a 4.5/5 like that. really respect the grind and dedication you have put on your novel! <3 recommend to anyone!

I think this is good. Synopsis though.. It's a little short yet attractive and made me want to read the novel. From what I got I think the plot is going on smoothly. As I read I keep reading more and more. So approved this. Highly recommended!!!

Nice story Creation 🥰🥰🥰🥰💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓 nice character development

In the beginning the writing and length of the chapters is not so good but it gets better after the 5 chapter. It has daily uploads and the characters are ok and are easy to understand although the MC is sometimes an idiot. And we need a backstory on the MC and his friends.

As someone who struggled with trying to figure what I was going to do before I finished school. I was able to relate to the character. The plot twist at the end caught me by surprise. It was really good. My only issue is the first chapter was kinda short. But over all great writing. I'll most definitely keep reading this book.

its deffinitely not for prople that are week hearted 🤣🤣 this story is soo full of plot twist but they are made in such a good way...I can only say wow and keep up your work author 😁❤

Okay so the story started off simple with normal teen life but at the end of the first chapter I really liked the twist, keep going your story has potential just a little bit polishing and your story will be flawless, great work author ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Your story is good i will not lie. But it's really fast paced. I'm not telling it's bad i love fast paced books so love to read your novel. waiting for the next chapter.

The fact that there is so little detail is one thing I really dislike. I want to learn more about the environment your characters are in. This story has a tonne of unexpected turns. Your story had me completely engrossed. I had to continue reading because I couldn't help myself hehe

Review till Chapter 14: I found the story to be a little fast-paced and simple at the beginning but that changed very fast. The story has its ups and downs but there is always a twist at the end of the chapters. The characters and the world are built well and dialogues are in a good flow, please keep up the good work. [img=recommend]

Lemme leave everything aside, I loved how you put "The End" as the name of the first chapter 🤣, the storyline is pretty good and how it is progressing and jumping from one plot twist to another shows how much the author is doing hard work, best of luck!🍃

It started off a little rough and fast but once I read a little more it got a lot better. Besides the beginning I love everything overall and I don’t have many complaints to say for this one.

It's probably gonna be clichè if I say this, but your novel was extremely abrupt in the beginning. The plot moved too fast for me. Plus, your characters need more work. Probably find a way to properly integrate them better further on. But that's just my opinion. Liked the novel though. I think it will be a great one. Keep it up! From GrandSky.

I found the story interesting, I recommend you read at least a few chapters before deciding whether you like it or not. I hope the author continues to write.

I personally like the rhythm of the novel, and the world seems interesting. Also, I feel that the author gives it a touch of exciting mystery.

Ok so first off, you have have good grammar and sentence structure which is like 90% of what you need to have a good story. a big thing i dont like is how there is barely any descriptIon. i want to know more about the world surroundIng them. you can say “a desert is dry”, but saying rather “It seemed as though the land hadnt rained in years, not a shrub in sight. i looked at a scene in which life had almost ceased to exist in a small corner of thIs massive world. cracks formed intricate patterns from lack of moisture...”. Description gives substance to writing and its not only to do with area. the same description can be used to describe the powers. scorching heat that could melt even diamond. or earth so strong and impregnable, nothing could pass through. otherwise your story is good, decent number of questions that can be answered later in the story to gove that Ohhhh factor. good job 👍

How to be a shadow. Quite an interesting title. It makes you think a little that can we be one. It felt the same. The plot is very unique. You got blown off from the thoughts you thought about it plus, it twists each time. The writing is very good. KEEP GOING AUTHOR

Uww~ it is really a fast paced after some chapters but still loved it... And the story really hooked me up.... The characters and world development was way too good as the story is... The author has a great potential to write a great novel.... Keep it up☺️☺️

Somewhat fast-paced but it's bearable. It's nice that you implement twists at the end of the chapters. My only suggestion is to try to slow down a little bit by building up the world background more and delving into the details ^-^ Overall, this is a fun read. I came here from a review swap but I'll definitely be staying