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Strongest Mage with the Lust system

作者: Blizzard54k
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[ Warning: Mature content R-18 ] Is death a new begining? For Max, it was. Max, a twenty-year-old virgin, got attacked by a bear in forest and died an untimely death. Fortunately for him... that wasn't the end to his story. In the next instant, he found himself transmigrated into the body of a noble's youngest son in a world full of Magic, wonders and... beautiful women. As if God was making up for his untimely death, he also got a system -The Lust System. "I can become stronger just by having sex?" Join the journey of Max and watch he have the time of his life and become the strongest mage the world had ever seen before. ______________________________ [Things to be noted] 1. From the title, you should've guessed it already but let me tell you the story will be filled with many sexual adventures. So... you are welcome to enjoy them..... 2. However... don't expect MC to have sexual relations with every woman he meets. I'll be focusing on the story, and would 'Try' not to blindly throw sex scenes left and right. 3. Most importantly, this is my first time writing so the the quality of first 50 or so may be a bit lacking (But it would cause you no problem if a few minor errors don't bother you). 4. It is a slow paced story. If you want everything to be explosive and fast, maybe this isn't for you. Important Note: If you enjoy the story then don't forget to vote your GTs, Power stones and also if you can, send some GIFTS too. This poor soul would appreciate it. Also check out My other work: [ Rise of the Strongest War God ] & [ My perverted devil system ] Happy reading~ ________________

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2 :Academy arc
3 :Chaos
4 :War!

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Reviewed at chp157: TLDR: It's not bad but neither is it good. It's a good read to kill time but not for me. I dropped it after powering through 100+chps. I think the weakest aspects of this novel are going to be the MC or the plot. Still, I recommend to anyone interested to give it a try. Some of you might enjoy it ✌️ WQ(4/5) - Very few grammar and spelling mistakes. Readable and decently written. SD(2/5) - Premise was interesting though the story development was subpar. Quite a few cliches and unfortunately far too many inconsistencies to ignore. Academy arc is quite boring imo. Overused cliches are fine as long as it's used well and presented in an interesting way. However, this was not the case here. CD(3/5) - I appreciate that author didn't want some Pokemon harem and actually tried to create interesting characters. However that took a dive once he hit the academy arc, I honestly think it's cause of the typical cliches found thus requiring some characters to be typical young master or damsel-in-distress archetypes. Now for the MC, oh boy, he's not evil but also not a goody two shoes, he's basically an average Joe who is actually rather pleasant. He's also a typical 'nice guy' in the romance department. Unfortunately it just seems MC doesn't learn from his mistakes and keeps mouthing off which causes him unnecessary drama and trouble. While it has also been stated that his world is cruel and strength is supreme, he also does not really show much initiative to actually get stronger or perhaps the author misuses time skips where MC doesn't seem to get any stronger. His system is also quite nerfed and it doesn't help that he's very lax when it comes to getting points. So while being in the academy, he doesn't truly require to be much stronger, in the broader world, he's actually very weak. I'm fine with weak characters, what I'm not fine with is characters who stay weak, who doesn't 'try hard'. US(4/5) - Author is consistent with updates and keeps interaction with audience. As this is his first novel, he's also very open to actual criticisms. WB(3/5) - Hard to judge as it's not a fanfic with an established world setting and since it's still the academy arc as of this review, we have a limited world scope. The introduction to their power system and settings is done in the initial chapters to get readers acquainted and is interesting enough. The world building hasn't truly begun to me. To the author: Now for a first novel of the author, not bad, decent attempt. I'm sure you'll improve after this and I hope to see your future works but for now this novel ain't for me. I still wish you all the best author! Keep striving and improving, you have potential!

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