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Ghosts & Souls

作者: DaoisttEfl77
Fantasy Romance
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Sravani_Gorla
Sravani_GorlaLv1Sravani_Gorla

Very good job on the story I love how you put lots of interest into this story keep up the amazing work[img=fp][img=exp][img=coins][img=recommend]

Darine_ALRAMMAH
Darine_ALRAMMAHLv1Darine_ALRAMMAH

The total plot and idea of this is interesting. I could the author is feeling himself from the style and details. The author seems new to this, but I'm sure he'll get the hang of this after reviewing well. As I said the plot is decent, the scenes and characters are put together in a good way. This plot is promising and I'm impressed with the effort put in this for further improvements! Waiting for more...

Akira_Monadelle
Akira_MonadelleLv13Akira_Monadelle

I'm sorry but I only give honest reviews and so, I'm going to be very honest. This novel is unreadable, I'm sorry for sounding harsh but it's a total mess. The novel lacks everything a novel should have. There's too much problems to list out. I recommend that the author read other novels beforehand and attempt this novel again. From the messy first chapter, I could tell that the plot is very cool but that's all that's good about this. This is my honest review, I apologize if you were hurt by my words.

Book_Pen
Book_PenLv3Book_Pen

The plot is interesting!! But the way you portray, will make the readers more interested. They are many grammatical mistakes, try using a grammar checker app. Put the conversations in different lines such that the readers don't get confused. Divide the description into paragraphs to make the novel friendly for the readers. The synopsis of the novel is missing. It is necessary as it gives the readers a brief description after the novel. Since the plot is good, I recommend you make a few changes to make the novel more appealing. Keep Going!!

funny2333
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Can't even know where to start. I love the story. I can't stop reading. I wish to have read it to the end of this instance. I totally love your description of events and how well-structured your conversations are.

TonyT
TonyTLv2TonyT

The way you write your story, I can see that you put a lot of effort in the dialogue and it does seem like you do care about the characters. However, the general structure of your sentences aren't cohesive and lack the basic form when it comes to dialogue. For example, the none usage of quotations marks can lead to very confusing exchanges between the characters. Also, it will help the story flow much better if you cut up your writing into paragraphs as opposed to a giant wall of text. Other than that, I can see that you do care about your writing and characters, you just need to work on the basic structures of writing. Just keeping working and you will eventually find a good flow

violetta_1
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It's a very nice read...keep writing dear author...[img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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