Darine_ALRAMMAH

This review is spectacular! Thank you for your honesty...I will take all of your tips to heart. Appreciated <3

Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more readers.

Thank you very much for this honest review! I am actually working on the descriptions and hopefully I'll get good at them. Thanks again!

Best Wishes!

lol yess!! :D

This can only be rated by perfection! A five star can never be enough! It has been so long since I said something is a master piece and this is the perfect definition of one. I love the style, the descriptions, the creativity, and everything about this! Keep going cuz I can't wait for more!

Good luck!!

The total plot and idea of this is interesting. I could the author is feeling himself from the style and details. The author seems new to this, but I'm sure he'll get the hang of this after reviewing well. As I said the plot is decent, the scenes and characters are put together in a good way. This plot is promising and I'm impressed with the effort put in this for further improvements! Waiting for more...

I am actually really impressed by this story. Your style inspires me actually even though it is kinda hard hard writing in the tense you use, but you managed to nail that so points for that. There is a few grammatical errors, but only picky people would comment on that since your style and events cover all that ish up. Keep going, I love this, and you a great author! Also I am waiting for more to come!!

An exciting well plotted read. I love the character's design and the detailed description. The events are synchronized and put together. I am loving this and definitely waiting for more content!