Review Detail of Book_Pen in Ghosts & Souls

The plot is interesting!! But the way you portray, will make the readers more interested. They are many grammatical mistakes, try using a grammar checker app. Put the conversations in different lines such that the readers don't get confused. Divide the description into paragraphs to make the novel friendly for the readers. The synopsis of the novel is missing. It is necessary as it gives the readers a brief description after the novel. Since the plot is good, I recommend you make a few changes to make the novel more appealing. Keep Going!!