Book_Pen
A person who loves writing on paper, but ended up typing on the keyboard. Instagram ID : book_pen._ Discord ID : Book_Pen#0994
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Book_Pen3 years ago発表Love the plot and the way the author made it intriguing. The writing style protrays how author wants to add every emotion to make it fun, sad and excited at the same time. Good work!! However, they are a few points that I kind of didn't like(purely personnel opinion). The length of the chapters, the sudden and at once throw of character info, the way the author differentiated two places or scenarios. I feel such a good plot and a fantastic writing skill shouldn't be hindered by some minute details. But frankly, love the plot and execution!
- Book_Pen3 years agoに返信 MayDreamer
sure🥰
- Book_Pen3 years agoコメント
time travelled
- Book_Pen3 years agoコメント
indications of magic to happen
- Book_Pen3 years agoコメント
magic is gonna happen👏👏👏
- Book_Pen3 years agoコメント
brother...that's a good reveal!
- Book_Pen3 years agoコメント
A common thing for handsome lads
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