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End of the Magic Era

作者: Zhuang Bifan
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The world that gave birth to the peak of magic civilization is about to be destroyed. The last survivor returned countless years in the past, that time was the birth of the magic civilization, countless mages were fumbling their ways on that thorny path. He, who came from the end of the era, was treading toward the Supreme Throne

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Chapter 1World’s End

After copying the last character of the Figaro formula, Lin Yun carefully closed his magic book and left the empty decaying library.

The sky was covered in deep scars, those were cracks torn open by the Netherstorm. The blood-red sun seemed to be giving out its final radiance, spilling with light and heat. The cruel, hot sunshine bathed every corner of the city while forming a fog of steam, taking away the last bits of life from there.

The Shelter Tower in the center of the city was still working, but that faint, bleak light always made people think about the old man past his prime who had always protected Heiss City's Shelter Tower for three thousand years, while also reminding them that this era was about to end.

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This was Noscent, a world which had once birthed a magnificent magic civilization, but was now about to die due to mana depletion...

When Noscent was at its peak, humans were able to bring magic to unimaginable heights. The mages from that time had world-shattering power. They sent expeditions through myriad planes and countless other races shivered under their staves after being subjugated.

They even proclaimed themselves living Gods. In fact, if mana hadn't been exhausted, some of them really would have been able to live almost eternally and have God-like power due to their thorough understanding of the secrets of magic.

Unfortunately, these times of grandeur had come to an end with the exhaustion of the world's mana.

Humans weakened day by day, and the huge magic fleet remained docked at the harbor. The frightening mana crystal cannons couldn't let out their ear-splitting sound anymore. Those countless planes once again regained their peace and no longer had to worry about the threat from these conquerors.

Even those mages that had once been able to challenge the Gods eventually began to fall. They were shocked to discover that they were powerless before the ravages of time after they lost their magical abilities. Name after name that had once conjured forth heroic memories were now engraved on tombstones. They followed Noscent's decline and gradually became forgotten in the ash heap of history...

The only things they left behind were the magic books in the library that Lin Yun just left. Each of them contained the crystallization of their experiences and the knowledge of many lifetimes. In the era before the exhaustion of mana, such a bounty would have been enough to make any mage go crazy from joy.

But now...

These books rested in the library untouched, covered with a thick layer of dust. They no longer had any meaning, except as a reminder of Noscent's former glory.

In Lin Yun's eyes, they weren't even as useful as the Figaro formula. At the very least, the Figaro formula could let one extract a bit of mana from the void while meditating. In this mana-depleted world, books with powerful spells and widespread, profound knowledge could only be considered materials for leisure reading.

'I'm so unlucky…'

Ever since he appeared in Noscent twenty years ago, Lin Yun had always been brooding over his misfortune.

'Isn't the usual transmigrator able to save their world before enjoying a fulfilling life? Why do I have to hunt for food in the desert? Why did I have to be buried with this world on the verge of destruction?

'This is too unfair...

'At the very least, I should have ended up in a better time period…'

Such as the Noscent of countless years ago…

The magic civilization was far from mature at that time, countless mages were still fumbling their way forward, slowly exploring the applications of magic. Humans had yet to reach their greatest heights, where they would one day use magic to create miracle after miracle.

But at least the Noscent of that time hadn't yet had its sky ripped apart by the Netherstorm and its land parched into endless deserts. The world had still been brimming with inexhaustible mana.

Most importantly, the people of that time hadn't needed to suffer through countless nightmares about the imminent end of the world...

"Ughh... " Lin Yun sighed. He dragged his exhausted body through a deathly silent street. There was not a single sound in the surroundings, making it seem as if Lin Yun was the last person remaining in the entire world.

Noscent was slowly treading toward its death. The natural resources that mankind relied on to survive were steadily getting exhausted every day. The human population of Heiss was getting sparser and sparser. At this rate, they might not even last until the final moment of the world. It seemed that Heiss might turn into a true ghost town under this silence.

This near-at-hand and desperate future made Lin Yun feel a chill.

'That's not right, it's actually a bit cold…'

Lin Yun had lived in Heiss for twenty years and had long been used to the cruel sun as well as the scorching desert outside the city. This feeling of cold that he hadn't experienced for the past twenty years felt like a viper digging into his clothes, leaving a tingling feeling in his back.

Fear flashed across Lin Yun's face, and he raised his head to look at the sky before paling in fright.

Heiss' sky was pitch-black, and boundless darkness was swallowing all the light between heaven and earth. The Shelter Tower that had protected Heiss for a few millennia ultimately exhausted its mana.

With that faint radiance extinguishing, Noscent was about to welcome its end.

As the radiance extinguished, the Netherstorm ripped through the sky. Huge flaming meteors fell down from the heavens. Berserk energy surged forth, crazily tearing apart the fragile space. Gales whistled around Heiss. The peaceful dunes transformed into huge waves of sand that seemed to want to bury Heiss.

The earth was caving in. The entire world was swaying fiercely as the lofty buildings toppled over. Lives faded away one after another.

Cries for help, prayers, screams...

Heiss, which had been silent for millennia, suddenly became extremely noisy. Blood and flames filled every corner of the city. The last city of mankind was finally reaching its end...

'It's finally coming.'

Lin Yun stood outside his dwelling, watching the event with a stupefied expression.

Then, the boundless darkness swallowed everything.

...

When Lin Yun eventually woke up, he saw that the sky had become azure and no giant crack could be seen, the bloody-looking crimson sun and the endless desert were also nowhere to be found.

Dense forests, unending mountain ranges, flowing rivers... everything in this world was filled with boundless vitality.

Naturally, there was also mana, mana was everywhere...

Compared to that final era countless years later, the Noscent of this era was like a shameful nouveau riche filled with abundant mana everywhere. Even the air seemed to ripple with a strong aura of mana, inexhaustible mana that any mage could tap into and spend lavishly without thought. 

For Lin Yun, who had lived over twenty years in that era of barrenness and decay, always thinking of any possible way to gather the slightest bit of mana, this was the paradise that he had been yearning for.

But Lin Yun didn't have time to be happy about waking up in such a paradise.

He just discovered that he was occupying an unfamiliar body.

From the memories left in his mind, the original owner of this body was a young hard-working 9th Rank Magic Apprentice named Mafa Merlin who had come under the tutelage of Great Mage Seth. His father, Locke Merlin, had been running an alchemy business. He had been in charge of the Flashing Gold chamber of commerce, one of the seven great chambers of commerce of Thousand Sails City.

It seemed pretty good: a well-off family and a promising future.

Unfortunately, this was already something of the past.

Mafa Merlin was really unfortunate; he had just stepped through the threshold to become a 9th Rank Magic Apprentice, putting him one step away from being able to wear the black robe and truly become a respected mage.

But at that time, his affluent father had an accident.

A storm swallowed the fleet of the Flashing Gold chamber of commerce. Several hundreds of people were unable to survive the shipwreck, including Locke Merlin, and the priceless goods also sank to the bottom of the sea.

It was a true disaster which startled the entire Thousand Sails City.

This naturally included the creditors of the Flashing Gold chamber of commerce...

The Flashing Gold chamber of commerce, one of the seven chambers of commerce of Thousand Sails City, was emptied overnight by those creditors. Moreover, family members of the victims kept coming to request compensation every day, weeping for their relatives while carrying home the remaining valuables of the chamber of commerce.

After losing his source of income, Mafa Merlin couldn't afford to continue his expensive magic studies and had no choice but to curtail his path to become a mage a month early and return home to help deal with the debts.

His large place of residence was now completely empty to the point that even rats wouldn't go there. The last servant had snuck out three days ago with a few dozen gold coins, all that he could find. Now, besides an old butler unwaveringly loyal to the old master, only Lin Yun remained.

'Eh, right, there is also a contract…'

That contract was sent by Locke's younger male cousin, Fario. According to the family tree, he would be Mafa's uncle. When Locke was still there, he took care of that younger cousin, giving him a lot of the dividends every year. Later, he spent a lot of money and used his connections to get him a seat as a public security official. This was a very lucrative job, and all kinds of bribes would land in his hands every year.

It was the same this time. Before Locke went out to sea, he gave his cousin a contract promising a share of the profits as per usual. He didn't need to spend anything and would get a large payment once the voyage was over.

No one had thought that such a freakish disaster would happen on this trip. And similarly, no one expected that right after Locke died, his dear cousin would bring the contract and ask for money as the terms promised.

This was the contract in front of Lin Yun. It wasn't a huge amount, a total of 8,000 gold. Back when Locke was still around, one of Mafa's magic experiments might have used more money than that.

But the problem was the timing...

To the current Mafa Merlin, owing such an amount was enough to induce despair. He wouldn't be able to produce the money even if he sold his entire body.

But even that wouldn't work, as the current Fario wasn't as nice as before...

As the repayment date approached, Mafa was getting more and more exhausted, both physically and mentally, and ultimately collapsed just after eating breakfast on this very day. Lin Yun was the one who inexplicably woke up a few hours later.

'That guy is so unlucky…' After digesting the memories left in his mind, Lin Yun had no choice but to sigh. This Mafa Merlin guy was truly unfortunate. It wasn't easy for a youth from an affluent family with a promising future to fall into this kind of trap.

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RoachTheRoach
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THIS IS AN ACTUAL REVIEW WITH DETAILS AND SUMMARY. READ IT. IF YOU WANT TO GET TO THE REVIEW, SKIP THIS PARAGRAPH. First, I would like to say that this novel deserves a higher rating than it currently has. Why? Because several people have left one-star reviews, claiming that the other novel in the "What's Next" section had more reviews. This is not true! Also, the original novel is NOT DROPPED. These rumors have been propagated by one single user who has also been leaving hate comments and abuse. Now, onto business. Overall Summary: I've only read to chapter 10, the latest chapter released, but it seems pretty good so far. The basic premise is that there is a character, named Lin Yun, living during the apocalypse. It's a magic world, but they used up all of the mana, and now there is none left, and their world is ravaged by disasters. The main character is originally from Earth. However, this seems unneeded as it is not relevant to the story in any way as far as I can tell. Lin Yun is struck by a mysterious phenomenon, causing them to transmigrate into the body of one Mafa Merlin, a 9th Rank Magic Apprentice. Mafa belongs to a trading company called the Flashing Gold Chamber of Commerce, and is very wealthy. However, his father was with their fleet of ships transporting several extremely valuable goods when a storm struck and sunk the fleet, killing his father and bankrupting the Flashing Gold Chamber of Commerce. Artemis Fowl, anyone? Now, creditors are coming to collect, but Mafa has no money to give them. Lin Yun, however, retains the knowledge of his two past lives, and is aware of several advanced techniques that would not exist for centuries, allowing him to advance into a 1st Rank Mage. And I can't reveal any more without spoilers! Yay! Translation Quality: 5/5: Not much to say here. Good grammar, slightly odd sentence structure, but that could be more due to the original style than the translator's style. Thanks for translating this, Shiraishi! Stability of Updates: 5/5: This one I can't really judge, since we haven't had any updates, but the original mass release (10 chapters) was enough to get a basic idea of the storyline, and apparently there will be 14/Chapters per Week, or 2/Chapters per Day. Thanks for translating, again, Shiraishi! Story Development: 2/5: Unfortunately, I'm going to have to give this one a 2/5. Why? Because there's not really a plot. Yes, I am perfectly aware that I have only read 10 chapters and that there is probably an actual plot. Here's the problem. The MC is insanely OP. He's aware of advanced techniques, looks like an alchemy genius, and so forth. That's the problem with so much future knowledge. Additionally, there is so much FACE-SLAPPING! Like, so much of it. It's the equivalent of... let's imagine you're in a technology competition. There's a really rich kid competing with you who has gotten this far on money alone. But now, he has to compete based solely on his skill... and he produces the technology needed to go faster than lightspeed. This is through no fault of your own, the problem is that the kid is from the future and knows how to build stuff that comes in several centuries. Do you see the problem? Now, let's say the... government wants his stuff. Unfortunately, the kid can also build giant mechas, plasma cannons, interstellar ships, and even technology that can stop a nuke. That's what the equivalent of this is. There's not going to be much of a plot because the MC is just THAT OP. Character Design: 4/5: This one's a bit hard to judge, since we've only seen about five different characters, including the MC. The MC himself is not that well-developed so far, but it's sort of funny to watch him drool over really common items since they don't exist far into the future. Going back to our earlier example, it's like the kid drooling over seeing a piece of wood. Maybe trees don't exist in the far future! Then, we have Raymond, the son of the old caretaker/housekeeper. He's a 5th Rank Mage who gets face-slapped by the MC. Then, Raymond is all, OMG, you're amazing, I'm gonna follow you around. He ends up getting amazing (to him) rewards from the MC, but the sad part is that the MC doesn't even notice... next comes the "uncle." Have you ever seen that trope where the family relative tries to take the MC's stuff after the parents die? Yeah. That's him, and he's the main reason that Character Design is losing a star. World Background: 5/5: Again, not much so far, but it's pretty well developed. It's a world called Noscent, and personally, I think the whole, "running out of mana" thing is very interesting. The ranking system goes like this: Magic Apprentice --> Mage --> Great Mage --> High Mage --> Archmage. They have something similar for other jobs as well, like Alchemist. In the beginning, we also get some fun background info about what wrecked the world, and later in the book, about other cities and countries, and so forth. Overall, this is pretty good, but there is likely to be a lot of face-slapping and MC being OP, so if you don't like this sort of thing, don't read it! I can't speak as to romance because we haven't even seen any female characters yet, so I don't know if there is romance. Also, Shiraishi is a very good translator! Thanks! I personally am going to keep reading this. Upvote this comment if you liked it so that more people can get ACTUAL reviews and not just random five-star or one-star reviews.

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Nightdrift
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This Novel needs some serious re writing. It is a classic example of someone writing a story synopsis to match a writing competition and still trying to make the synopsis/MC backstory seem relatable and exciting, only to then realize that it was a load of trash and will cripple the progress of their story as they don't know how to properly integrate the components. The author thus has a very thick face, makes many, many contradictory statements and events. MC winds up unrelatable and unrealistic considering his past. Case in point, the back story of the MC does not line up with his actions, he should have barely read anything in that huge library because a) it was huge, B) he was fighting for his life and recources all the time, c) he was a young man. He had neither the time nor mental acuity to digest the library's contents. In the authors own words the MC was average. Other than the bare necessity of Mana cultivation knowledge he should know nothing about alchemy, because a) in his original time there were next to no alchemy resources and thus no need to waste time on 'useless learning' , B) he would have little to no time to practice and experiment, which as even the author states, is absolutely necessary. In short this story is pushed ahead by its release date and general lack of glaring spelling and Grammer errors, thanks to some decent editors. Unfortunately they as well fail in the prime editing directive, which is to do more than just correct spelling and Grammer. A piece of software can do that much, they fail to correct the terrible inconsistencies found in this novel. This novel is a symptom of the worst of webnovel's glamour. And yet simply changing the MC from a 20 year old youth when he died to a 100-200 year old veteran wizard who had the time to absorb decent amounts of misc knowledge from the library turns the whole paradigm on its head. Will it require a lot of rewriting, yes. But it needs to happen nonetheless. In short, if the author want his novel to be anything more than a trashy joke then they need to seriously consider the overall novel balance and scope, otherwise this novel will slowly throttle itself to death in a mire of tangled and increasingly convoluted and contrived plots.

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