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2019-11-27 22:12

This book is basically composed of 10% of the main character's thoughts, while the other 90% is made up of random side characters speculating on what the mc is doing, commenting on how foolish he is, sucking him off, and thinking about how retarded the current 3 chapter antagonist is for offending him(generally after 3 chapters they're enlightened by previous offenders, and then go on a tirade thinking about how lucky they are to be alive and more dick sucking). It's basically the thoughts of everyone OTHER than the main character. It's annoying. In addition, the mc takes fucking years to shut people up, because it's very important that the insignificant side characters can get their entire thought process and life stories across to the readers before the mc shuts them up.

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