Deceit Chronicles

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An exhilarating tale and i would love to recommend this to everyone. MC journey from noble heir to a key player in a divine battle captivates with its blend of high-stakes action and strategic cunning. World building, side character and theme is well written

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The world building is good as you can see it has mysteries which leave us to wonder. I like the mc personally I feel like I would relate to mc he feels very human not too arrogant and a bit of humor. The characters are described well. Great work and keep it up.

The story is predominantly told from the MC's point of view. While the narrative can be a bit lazy at times and the world-building progresses slowly for the number of chapters, the plot remains interesting and fresh. The relationship development is particularly intriguing and well-executed.

The story is slow-paced and there are some mistakes here and there but overall, The plot is quite fascinating. The MC is not your average childish or righteous but is quite smart and adaptable to his situation. The side characters are also well-written. The mysteries surrounding the world make it more interesting. The battle scenes are average but could be improved. In my opinion, If the Author doesn't mess up too much, It has the potential to become a gem. Good Luck

This web novel is a captivating journey into a world where shadows conceal secrets, and the line between light and darkness is blurred. The story follows a young woman with a mysterious past as she navigates a city filled with dangerous creatures, secret organizations, and hidden powers. The plot is fast-paced and packed with twists that keep you on the edge of your seat. Just when you think you have things figured out, another unexpected turn keeps you guessing. The world-building is rich and immersive, with a deep lore that unfolds gradually, making the city itself feel alive with its dark alleys, hidden tunnels, and constant undercurrent of danger.

I read the first 20 chapters thus far, so far so good. All the characters are likeable and relatable. I hope the rest of the story manages to keep the quality up. Good job, author, and hope that you don't drop.

Nice character descriptions and a generic but still fun opening that gives a good background description of the MC. The story seems pretty good so far, and I'll continue reading, it looks like the MC is proactive, which I like.

It's a fun ride, you'll find it interesting. I know you won't belief me but trust me this book is probably way better than the book you were going to read anyways, so read this. This is enjoyable 🙂 Just when I thought the book will be no longer interesting, the author thickens the plot.

i just readed three chapters your novel has strong character introduction world building is good pacing is balanced not too rush and not to slow some plot point is like that you can easily predict very detailed it sometime disrupt the pace complex plot setup Overall, the first 3 chapters of "Deceit Chronicles" lay a strong foundation for the story, with engaging characters, a richly detailed world, and a well-balanced mix of action and exposition. While there are some areas that may need refinement, the strengths of the early chapters promise an exciting and immersive reading experience. looking forward

Its a story told from a first-person perspective, you could feel that the story pace is slow. World building needs to be improved, i could not envision the setting that is being portrayed throughout the story. The battle scenes were fairly average but the character development and the character's relationship was well-read for me. I would say in overalls, this novel could be improved. Once it does, it will be golden..

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New fan here, I read until chapter 10 and so far the only thing that can draw the story back a little is the overall pacing. In general it's good feels unique in its own way and the story feels fleshed out. I'm going to keep reading it. Highly recommend it!

The story is well thought out, with ample world building and story development. Story is a bit slow paced, but that's how this genre goes, the author needs to put in sufficient world building first so it works. Aside from that, the character design is amazing. Accurately describing characters to giving them life, this book does it all. Added to my library.

Great start, a bit generic but we come to this genre for this so it's okay, I like the baby start better but can't have everything. I think I'll have a good time with this one

It's just efficace. Good job. If pour requirement is not complicatef, you can go ahead and read it .

fairly good!! regular fantasy but interesting detail

This is my first writing a novel so it will be interesting...

If you wanT To know truly my opinion then i will say author destroyed his good story. 1st of all can you clarify us that are you writing novel pr biography? when i read i don't get the feling of reading novel i feel i am reading a biography. and every character is behaving lije a robot. even though they are showing emotion i have to say i fell you didn't get depth of a character & the story is getting rushed. power system is also have a problem you can understand by going ch 8. & technic how they work you didn't say. you didn' t use system efficiently. lastly world background? there is none . which empire? who rule what? it might have at letter ch but sorry i got bored of reading same theme. but if you solve every problem then i can say this will be a greate story..