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An exhilarating tale and i would love to recommend this to everyone. MC journey from noble heir to a key player in a divine battle captivates with its blend of high-stakes action and strategic cunning. World building, side character and theme is well written

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The world building is good as you can see it has mysteries which leave us to wonder. I like the mc personally I feel like I would relate to mc he feels very human not too arrogant and a bit of humor. The characters are described well. Great work and keep it up.

The story is predominantly told from the MC's point of view. While the narrative can be a bit lazy at times and the world-building progresses slowly for the number of chapters, the plot remains interesting and fresh. The relationship development is particularly intriguing and well-executed.

The story is slow-paced and there are some mistakes here and there but overall, The plot is quite fascinating. The MC is not your average childish or righteous but is quite smart and adaptable to his situation. The side characters are also well-written. The mysteries surrounding the world make it more interesting. The battle scenes are average but could be improved. In my opinion, If the Author doesn't mess up too much, It has the potential to become a gem. Good Luck

This web novel is a captivating journey into a world where shadows conceal secrets, and the line between light and darkness is blurred. The story follows a young woman with a mysterious past as she navigates a city filled with dangerous creatures, secret organizations, and hidden powers. The plot is fast-paced and packed with twists that keep you on the edge of your seat. Just when you think you have things figured out, another unexpected turn keeps you guessing. The world-building is rich and immersive, with a deep lore that unfolds gradually, making the city itself feel alive with its dark alleys, hidden tunnels, and constant undercurrent of danger.

I read the first 20 chapters thus far, so far so good. All the characters are likeable and relatable. I hope the rest of the story manages to keep the quality up. Good job, author, and hope that you don't drop.

Nice character descriptions and a generic but still fun opening that gives a good background description of the MC. The story seems pretty good so far, and I'll continue reading, it looks like the MC is proactive, which I like.