Biologist and hardcore gamer with a passion for merging science and fantasy. My greatest muse, my three-year-old daughter, whose wide-eyed curiosity reminds me daily of the magic that surrounds us.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting! (∿°○°)∿ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ǝʌol
Hello! Thank you so much for your interest and for taking the time to ask. The beta has already ended; it was a closed stage with participation limited to some authors I know and family members who enjoy reading. The goal was to gather general feedback on the story's flow and how engaging certain aspects were. This version you're seeing now is the third edition and has changed quite a bit from the rough draft that was the beta. I promise to work with all the seriousness and dedication needed to make Ren's exciting adventures accessible as soon as possible. Truly, thank you for your support and for reading. (∿°○°)∿ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ǝʌol
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Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, and I’m really sorry if the little gimmick felt frustrating. The idea was to build tension during the first run by keeping it unclear who’s really at risk, it’s something that only lasts during that initial challenge. That said, I’ll definitely keep an eye on how it’s received and make adjustments if it feels too confusing for more readers. I really appreciate your feedback, and I’m grateful you took the time to share it! (∿°○°)∿ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ǝʌol
Do you really think risking your life in fires, natural disasters, or extreme danger is just for the money? That’s a pretty simplistic argument that ignores reality. There are plenty of jobs that are just as or even less dangerous but pay far better. If it were all about the money, there’d be endless lines for those jobs, and they wouldn’t be understaffed in many parts of the world. There’s something called vocation, empathy, and a desire to help... things that can’t be measured in dollars. I’ll admit, though, that some people might find something beyond money in these roles: perhaps recognition, a sense of purpose, or even the moral satisfaction of helping others. But that doesn’t change the fact that they’re risking their lives for others, indeed a decision not everyone would make. As for Elio’s father, he had his own reasons, but at this point in the story, you don’t fully know them. Still, I find it curious that you’re focusing on ‘negatives’ in a novel that clearly doesn’t align with your initial interests or expectations. I’d still recommend exploring other genres or stories that better fit what you’re looking for. (∿°○°)∿ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ǝʌol
I’m starting to see a pattern here... you seem to jump into different stories just to troll the writers. You’re free to do that though, I don’t mind much. But if you’re genuinely looking for stories where "young masters" or antagonistic forces win, maybe try searching for better tags. It's clear this story might not be for you, Elio isn’t meant to fit into that mold; his personality and growth are central to the narrative, even if it doesn’t cater to your preferences. Still, thanks for taking the time to leave a review. (∿°○°)∿ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ǝʌol
Because it’s useless to him, lol. (∿°○°)∿ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ǝʌol
Out-of-place comments like these are starting to become so absurd they’re actually entertaining... Keep them coming, I guess? (∿°○°)∿ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ǝʌol
Out-of-place comments like these are starting to become so absurd they’re actually entertaining... Keep them coming, I guess? (∿°○°)∿ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ǝʌol
Depending on whatever pseudo-logic or personal bias you apply, literally anything in a novel can be called a plot device. It’s just how storytelling works. (∿°○°)∿ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ǝʌol