DBZ : Original Timeline Gohan

Honestly, that last line with Not needing a System simply because he's Gohan just hit the feels man. Hopefully, it works out well in the future chapies and derail in to the mess most other DBZ fanfics make.

Well its lacking in in depth story and character dev, emotion etc. its good if you like to read db fanfic it should be. mc will be op and its just kinda smooth for him i don't like manuplating author its like whole world is trying to kill mc i dont like thag kind of story but this is kinda too smooth haha

Great fanfic of Dragonball 🐉🎱 Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.The story itself is good, not perfect, but still good. 🤪

it's actually pretty good, i mean it's decent better than most would recommend

How DOES THIS BOOK HAVE SO LITTLE VIEWS??? PEOPLE YOUR MISSING OUT

Honestly amazing compared to other dragon ball fanfics. MC is put into Future Gohan a day after he died, a great premise. No lusting after every girl on sight like other fics, he's inherited gohan's personality and memories, and is able to hide his knowledge of the future well. Would recommend, 10/10.

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I read up to the most recent chapter (Chapter 32) and I say it's a great read, without boring systems or crazy tricks, just good old effort and use of logic, after all, if the MC already has all the knowledge of the plot the most the correct thing to do is to use it. So far 9/10, hope it stays that way, looking forward to more updates.

Bro, literalmente este tipo en el primer capítulo cumplió la promesa de Gohan antes de morir en manos de los androides: " Yo no moriré, no importa que mi cuerpo sea completamente destruido... Mis ganas de pelear me levantarán porque son muy grandes!"

Asian DB fanfic. Fun to read and without any neo-western cultural garbage.

Please, please, I want the main female role to be Caulifla She is the best woman Please, please, I want the main female role to be Caulifla She is the be st woman Please, please, I want the main female role to be Caulifla She is the best woman

Very well written, excellent translation. I highly recommend it, there are very few Dragon Ball fanfics of this level. And then it's Mirai Gohan!

A pretty satisfying take on dragon ball series..it's very heart warming with how the story turned out. This is one of my fav db fanfiction. Thank you for the work

Top class among a lot of db fanfics that I have read. keep up the Good work

Es muy buena no ay muchas historias que se enfoque tanto en el centimiento del mundo en el que esta .y que tenga sentido . Tanbien que no se quiebre la armonia con los personajes tal como goku y vegeta que en la linea del futuro no estaban

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