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2024-09-28 23:39

Well its lacking in in depth story and character dev, emotion etc. its good if you like to read db fanfic it should be. mc will be op and its just kinda smooth for him i don't like manuplating author its like whole world is trying to kill mc i dont like thag kind of story but this is kinda too smooth haha

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Though it really has bad stuff the story is really good

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