Item: DBZ : Original Timeline Gohan
Rating: 5
Author: EditorBr0701

EditorBr0701Lv49mth

2024-06-26 09:58

I read up to the most recent chapter (Chapter 32) and I say it's a great read, without boring systems or crazy tricks, just good old effort and use of logic, after all, if the MC already has all the knowledge of the plot the most the correct thing to do is to use it. So far 9/10, hope it stays that way, looking forward to more updates.

DBZ : Original Timeline Gohan

GarudaTranslation

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