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Chronicles of a Nobody

作者: Hoggysama
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What is Chronicles of a Nobody

WebNovel で公開されている、Hoggysama の作者が書いた Chronicles of a Nobody の小説を読んでください。A young man dies full of regret with his monotonous life of emptiness. He finds himself in a dark space. One thing leads to another and off on an adventure he goes.First World: NarutoFirst time author...

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A young man dies full of regret with his monotonous life of emptiness. He finds himself in a dark space. One thing leads to another and off on an adventure he goes. First World: Naruto First time author here folks. Just trying my own take on a fanfic here. I'll try to post a chapter a day. Please feel free to post your criticism and opinions on the story. I'll try to incorporate everything I see and make it better.

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The System the same old story heroes and villains being chosen for generations as long as history has been recorded villains and heroes will rise and the system to help them. After years of the system doing the same thing rise and fall the system created the lineage for having a champion it is known as "The King's Banquet", in if you survive you can have as much fun as you can be a villian a hero or a grey hero. The chosen champion if they succeed they can forcibly choose the sucessor even centuries after death. The last Champion for obvious reason's decided there should be a safety net for the future successors so he added the luck attribute. It prevents you from dying but at the consequence of your abilities, youth, strength, mind, or even powers. As a form of the System's retaliation the system for all who use it especially the champions all missions more difficult so as they arise the people who used the system became both weaker and stronger. We start of with a young man (a coward) hearing the myths and legends of heroes and villains in amazement and bliss to something he could not obtain. He wonders and brings the connection between the system (something he was not familiar with but had heard of on a few occasions) and the heroes and by sheer chance is offered a choice "Would You Like To Take Part In The System's Entertainment?" The young man a complete coward, stares at the screen thinking the correlation caused this but fears of the possibility of training and hardships he may have to face but a missed opportunity if he let's it slip he had no idea what to do so he sits there waiting for inspiration, someone to make the choice for him or a sign at the very least. No sign comes he stares at the screen awkwardly, in a latch ditch decision he chooses yes. He is offered with multiple choices and for the System's amusement many classes are locked and as little information as possible is given which are brokenly quoted from the master of their classes. As a form of a safety net after reading the description of knight he decides to choose it but an error arises and he is no longer given a choice. But out of help the last champion overrides the system in a latch ditch effort and gives him the chance to be a drunkyard else he would not been given a class and would of been given an impossible task. P.S.:The System has a dark sense of humor and likes to play what would be considered cruel jokes in human terms but the system knows of no such thing.

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69PAIN69
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Wow it's a great novel i love it can't wait to see more of this content ...................................................................

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

3 stars for mass release and kudos for you to converting the ATG PL to naruto. -No CD, theres no character development what so ever in you story, Your MC just trains and talks with system, no interaction between characters other than talking here and there and suddenly in C15 he pissed ad his gramps condition. there was barely any interaction between em before. And above all the MC is bland and has no real purpose, just does shit for the sake of it. -No exploration or addition of new things, not even characters. You got an entire village and people but none of it is explored [ as of C15]. And after c15 he meets and talks but its just bland, training, MC showing jutsu with no training, gramps going oh thats my grandson and acting like its nothing? its OOC, no hint of a war veteran or a leader who is in war times, rather some peaceful old man who dosnt care. This is was stupid, they are in turbulent times and the old man accepts this shit? -And you did mention new mountain range/place but thats all, no exploration of it. You should've explored the working of kumo, -Plus the starting chps were all system and jargon whist the rest are just training, info, or something like that. moments of MC getting stronger, no actual story or plot. honestly feels like a training manual listing what someone did to get stronger. And then theres the power. you've introduced ATG thing but other than the PL and body and veins, its all naruto and other world shit like demon slayer or observation haki. you've failed at using/exploring the ATG power in naruto. And not sure if you know this, even with the conversation ATG is a world where the cannon fodders were easy god madara to kaguya [ this is not an exaggeration, ]..it ATG, yun che in his starting moments earth profound could easily lift sword weighing tons, or the budda art that giving pure physical strength that drawfs any and all in naruto verse minus god tiers [ wiki: First Stage - Provides strength of one thousand five hundred kilos. just physical strength. MC already a god by 4th stage and it provide durability ]. All in all its just bland and boring, with barely any CD or WD and the ATG is just useless, as it really serves no purpose, plus just butchers you story cause that verse things are too OP for naruto. The moments mentioned in the story are either MC training or fighting, no actual content or character interactions. [ the one with samui, gramps, or training were just talking about MC doing jutsu ] -- I just removing the training moments and explore the world and character interactions properly

AnimeNovel_Lover
AnimeNovel_LoverLv3AnimeNovel_Lover

the story is good and it would be better if you give him a small harem of 3 or 4.......................................................................................

TFX9
TFX9Lv2TFX9

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Absolute_Zer0
Absolute_Zer0Lv2Absolute_Zer0

Carbon copy from Divine Anime System and similiar fics but butchered brutalized with 1D characters. System reliant simp just so happens to be reincarnation of Chad and he has enemies from past life or something (didn't read past chapter 10 but I can literally smell this development). And start is completely useless no character development. I really hate those fics with system that tells protagonist how to sh*t with his pants down.

Sloth_King21
Sloth_King21Lv4Sloth_King21

This story is awesome. Keep up the good work[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

hostile_fire
hostile_fireLv13hostile_fire

this story is like drugs, you can't stop reading it, it's so good lol, the grammar is very good too so you will have smooth ride reading this

_Na_Na_
_Na_Na_Lv13_Na_Na_

it's Great but it's dropped ..............

Zed1_Eren_
Zed1_Eren_Lv4Zed1_Eren_

it was a great mc is not so op but grows with time it's just that he is an ungreatfull bast*rd who scolds his system for every thing he even forgets that she is the reason he is Alive 😤

1stDrunkenImmortal
1stDrunkenImmortalLv141stDrunkenImmortal

Aaa

Jun_MoXi3
Jun_MoXi3Lv11Jun_MoXi3

Me ha encantado, lo leí en un día. Me deprime ver qué lo has dejado caer(?) Es interesante el que esté en otra aldea y no en Konoha y me gusta bastante MC Espero vuelvas pronto:(

msyaifulloh2111
msyaifulloh2111Lv2msyaifulloh2111

Salah satu fanfic Naruto terbaik. Mengambil sisi Kumogakure sebagai latar belakang, tapi dari sini aku bisa menyimpulkan bahwa banyak penulis yang membuat MC Kumo selalu cenderung terikat dengan Raikage. Berbeda dengan MC yang mengambil latar belakang desa lain, kebanyakan dari mereka berani untuk mengambil latar sipil dan menggeluti latar cerita yang lebih keras terutama dari sisi politik dan kehidupan Shinobi. Walau demikian cerita ini sendiri cukup menarik dengan segala kemudahan yang dimiliki oleh MC. Aku membacanya beberapa bulan yang lalu dan membacanya lagi sekarang untuk melihat kelanjutannya. Sayangnya penulis belum melanjutkan ceritanya 😔 Tapi aku tetap menunggu kelanjutan cerita ini, aku berharap penulis akan melanjutkan ceritanya suatu saat nanti 🙏

Cardinal_Harb
Cardinal_HarbLv5Cardinal_Harb

Reached chapter 21, and it's still a training montage, the system is practically useless, it just keeps showing him skills and other stuff, with outrageous prices that he has no way of being able to put up, on top of that, with all the skills that he got from other worlds (mostly through gacha, or the starter pack), he's way too weak.

Bunny_3
Bunny_3Lv3Bunny_3

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Daoist7PXpGE
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fantacia_000
fantacia_000Lv4fantacia_000

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msyaifulloh2111
msyaifulloh2111Lv2msyaifulloh2111

Secara keseluruhan sangat luar biasa, karena diawal sudah di plot untuk cerita ATG, kita para pembaca dapat memastikan bahwa cerita akan berlangsung lama, karena setelah Naruto akan ada ATG. Pertanyaan nya adalah ketika menyebrang ke dunia ATG, apakah MC akan mulai dari awal cerita atau di tengah cerita? Mengingat dia pasti akan menyebrang setelah mencapai puncak Alam Ilahi. Terimakasih banyak kepada penulis untuk cerita yang luar biasa, ditunggu selalu pembaharuan nya!

fantacia_000
fantacia_000Lv4fantacia_000

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Zero33
Zero33Lv2Zero33

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