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BLOODY POTTER

作者: freakofntur
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WebNovel で公開されている、freakofntur の作者が書いた BLOODY POTTER の小説を読んでください。join Harry as he adventures through canon so that he can live in peace and debauchery...

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join Harry as he adventures through canon so that he can live in peace and debauchery

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WARNING [MATURE CONTENT!!!] SHORT NOTE.. He gently crawled back on the bed, placing his warm hands between her thighs, he separated them, creating a passage for himself. He looked at her and smiled. His eyes twinkled with lust, so strong his monster ached. He lifted her left thigh up, kissing every inch of it. Aria moaned in ecstasy, loving the magic his touch left on her skin. "This is what you want, huh?" He whispered, staring back into her face. "Yes..." She mumbled, unable to make a sentence. Aria's eyes were closed and her lower lips were between her teeth. The pleasure she was feeling was immeasurable. The strange man smirked against her thighs. "I'll give it to you..." He replied with a satisfactory groan, losing his mind over Aria. Everything about her body drove him crazy. It was like she was some sort of untouched ripe fruit getting ready for him to harvest. He continued with his deadly kisses all over her thighs, getting closer to her core. The closer he got, he noticed her feminine spot was too tight for a random girl in a bar to have. "Are you a virgin?" He whispered. He had to know. He wouldn't want to pump her too hard and give her a bad experience. Aria was flushed all over as she felt so shy. She nodded, replying to the question, and tried to close her legs but the stranger stopped her. "Why didn't you tell me?" He asked as he sat up, looking at her. Aria tried to lay straight on the bed with eyes looking up at the roof. She felt embarrassed. Why did he have to ask such questions? Why couldn't he just go on and have his fun like so many men wanted? Besides, it was his job to pleasure her. She was going to pay for the service. "Why didn't you tell me that you were a virgin before we started? I could have hurt you!" He snapped. * * * * * She was heart broken and hopeless after the scene she saw between her fiance and her best friend. With pains and a broken heart, she went to the bar to drink away her sorrow, but the unexpected happened when a handsome gentle man entered the bar and attracted her attention.

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Tonyorobsky
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Too much like the summary of a story. Rushed, not explored enough, no dialogues, no emotions. The characters and background desperately need some development.

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Kabuk5
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I find it amazing that most of the authors on the site are high functioning sociopaths, I guess webnovel is a bad influence. Besides that, Tonyorobsky said it all, you have a good idea , but poor execution at the moment, read what've you written out loud and you will notice the issues, hopefully it gets better. Add more descriptions, more interactions, the human element to say.

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