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Tonyorobsky
TonyorobskyLv133yrTonyorobsky

Too much like the summary of a story. Rushed, not explored enough, no dialogues, no emotions. The characters and background desperately need some development.

BLOODY POTTER

freakofntur

1の人に「いいね!」しました

いいね
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返事はありません。最初になろう!