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DreamReaper
DreamReaperLv22mth
2024-09-02 18:00

There's 3 factors here that made the review 3.4. Firstly the story development, followed by the character design and world background. The introduction for the opening chapter was not that great of a start. I was expecting something to happen as he got into the woods but the author made it look very ordinary. Atleast put some stray animals there or something that could intrigue your readers. In concludsion, it was very normal, just a kid with superhuman strength. Some dialogue flows unnaturally. Most scenes was rushed. The cuts per chapter needs a lot of improvement. Character design, there was nothing unique, plain and simple. World background... this is the most lacking. The story can be waited out for about 20-30 more chapters before the final verdict.

Cursed Blessings: Tales of twisted fates

Coolguy
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46 Chs

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Thanks for the honest review.

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