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2024-09-08 19:08

This is a wonderful novel, down from the character design to the world background. everything is well planned out. But I believe the author should really work on his writing skill to ensure better reading experience for the readers. All together, it was a wonderful read and I urge more readers's to read this!

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Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I’m thrilled you enjoyed the character design and world-building. Your feedback is super helpful, and I’ll keep it in mind as I continue. Thanks for urging others to read my novel—you’re awesome! 🌟📖✨

The_Broken_Author
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just try to do more show than tell. And also try to put the words before the action

Coolguy:Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I’m thrilled you enjoyed the character design and world-building. Your feedback is super helpful, and I’ll keep it in mind as I continue. Thanks for urging others to read my novel—you’re awesome! 🌟📖✨
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