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2024-09-12 00:23

The novel is a great novel. The plot is well-planned, The story development is a little slow at the beginning, but it gets better as the story progresses. The character design is not perfect, but it is written in a well-understood way and tune with the reader's expectations. The world background is great, too, and the updating stability is also alright. The writing quality needs some patching here and there, but all in all, it is a great novel. Keep going, Author.

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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! 😊 I’ll definitely work on improving the writing quality. Your encouragement means a lot to me, and I’ll keep striving to make the novel even better. Stay tuned for more exciting chapters! 📚✨

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