After reading this fanfic up to the last written chapter, this was my conclusion: What did the author have in mind when writing that lousy arc? Sorry if it sounds offensive, but it's the truth. The only thing that kept me from ignoring this novel were the first 5 chapters and the trope itself. But after that? Boom: 9+ chapters with a plot that was clearly pulled out of nowhere. It makes no sense, it's boring, and the most infuriating thing is that it seems endless. God! I'm even sure there are more chapters to come with this arc.
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Thank you for the review :V. It's okay, I appreciate your honesty. There are two more chapters to finish this entire arc, I shortened as much as possible. My idea was to mix light and dark elements, the problem was that the dark became too dark and the light too light that the first volume gave those feelings. I'm still experimenting some things lol. I regret this first arc, I was too innocent in creating this mystery. I learned a lot in the process. The next volumes will have a difference vibe, I hope you give it a try later, but I understand if you drop. Thank you for your time, I'm happy at least those five chapters gave you a little of fun.
I'm not going to stop reading this novel. The last few chapters were irritating, but that doesn't mean the fanfic is bad per se. It just needs some polish, a couple of corrections here and there and that's it!
Frowfy:Thank you for the review :V. It's okay, I appreciate your honesty. There are two more chapters to finish this entire arc, I shortened as much as possible. My idea was to mix light and dark elements, the problem was that the dark became too dark and the light too light that the first volume gave those feelings. I'm still experimenting some things lol. I regret this first arc, I was too innocent in creating this mystery. I learned a lot in the process. The next volumes will have a difference vibe, I hope you give it a try later, but I understand if you drop. Thank you for your time, I'm happy at least those five chapters gave you a little of fun.
