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TheAuthorKami

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  • TheAuthorKami
    TheAuthorKami5 months ago
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    When reading this novel, I came to the conclusion that Clara, the protagonist and Tony Stark’s daughter, is just an excuse. The author simply watched the movies and decided it would be a good idea to turn them into a novel. In short, if you ignore the protagonist—who only appears from time to time—this novel is basically a copy-and-paste of the movies.

  • TheAuthorKami
    TheAuthorKamia year ago
    Replied to MadBorne

    Can you tell me where you read the original novel and up to which chapter your translation has reached in the original fanfic?

  • TheAuthorKami
    TheAuthorKamia year ago
    Replied to MadBorne

    It seems that you misunderstood me. When I looked up the fanfic in its original language, it was very different from the translation you created. The MC had a different name, the crab demon he killed with Aki was actually killed by the MC alone, and Aki only came to ask him about it. Their association was for a different reason, etc. That’s why I’m asking if this is really a translation.

  • TheAuthorKami
    TheAuthorKamia year ago
    Posted

    Is this fanfic really a translation? I went to read the original novel, and when comparing them, this translation seems to take the base of the original fanfic and create a novel with similar elements. Aside from that, the story isn’t bad.

  • TheAuthorKami
    TheAuthorKamia year ago
    Replied to Daoist2MagJ2

    Can I know the original name of this fanfic?

  • TheAuthorKami
    TheAuthorKamia year ago
    Posted

    The author said this is a translation, but I have my doubts. Is this actually a translation? Or was it created by AI? Two chapters are repeated, each with the same theme but in different settings (12, 13). In chapter 14, there is even a mistake where ChatGPT’s “suggestions” for improvement are shown. There are also missing tags. Is this a harem? Does it have romance? Does it not? Etc.

  • TheAuthorKami
    TheAuthorKamia year ago
    Replied to Nemty

    Can you tell me the original name of this fanfic?

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  • TheAuthorKami
    TheAuthorKamia year ago
    Commented

    Author, is this a translation? If so, what is the original name?

    This book has been deleted.
  • TheAuthorKami
    TheAuthorKamia year ago
    Commented

    Is there romance in this story? It would be nice if there were only a pure friendship with Okara, just like Vegeta and Goku~