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2024-07-25 02:50

I don't know why this was recommended to me and I don't know how all I do know is that I really love how this story is going so far. Within 24 hours of reading this I have checked about 8 or 9 times to see if it had been updated. While I couldn't really connect with the prologue that well for some reason the first chapter beyond had me captivated and enthralled. The writing is great and can clearly portray what the author wanted to tell us The comedy is amazing and doesn't feel overwhelming and forced in the story like some others The idea itself is fantastic and the interactions between Tuesday and Wednesday is wonderful The chapters themselves have a nice length so they don't feel too short or too long The only flaw I can find in the story (in my opinion ) is the lack of chapters this has which I'm sure will be a non issue in the future. A few things to note 1. I haven't watched Wednesday Addams I have seen the old movie about it so I know a baseline of the family though even if you have little to no knowledge of the characters prior I'm sure you'll be able to understand them quite quickly from the author's description 2. Please do check out the Author's other fanfic about Steven universe (I'm not even a fan of SU but I enjoyed it very much) 3. If I were to truly rate this with a comment it would just be the word perfect however I know that when people are looking at reviews the 5 star reviews with little explanation on why they like it are the worst so i wanted to explain my review Sorry if there were any typos or grammatical errors as I'm writing on my phone and writing what comes to mind for this review Keep up the good work author and hopefully you can shelter all my stones as they're all going to reside here from now on

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I haven't even considered this for any other novel or fanfic but this is probably one of the only ones that I would genuinely pay money for unfortunately it seems like you can't give gifts to fanfic stories (if you can please tell me how)

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I will treasure this comment for a long time. It's the first time I see someone talking long about my writing. Also, don't need give me money, I also can't monetize fanfics. In the future I will create original stories, but until there your feelings are more than enough. I will release the next chapter on day 28 and starts officially 07/08 with releases every three days. Again, thanks for the review. After read it I really wanted to write right now :).

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