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Iam_Cat

Iam_Cat

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2021-08-17 BergabungIndia
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  • Iam_Cat
    Iam_Cat2yr
    Berkomentar

    Anything for science.

    Shiroken chuckled, "Oh no no... he won't die. And we should let Tsunade and Jiraiya fight, only by fighting will they learn their lessons. And about Danzo... I want him to use his eyes on us. I wonder how good Kotoamatsukami is from Monari's Genjutsu, that can even put an Otsutsuki to eternal sleep."
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    Iam_Cat2yr
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    More Chapterss.

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  • Iam_Cat
    Iam_Cat2yr
    Diterbitkan

    Just read it. It will hook you up forever. Best character development, world plot is also good and everything is great. So just spend something and try it.

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  • Iam_Cat
    Iam_Cat2yr
    Balas Thieving

    It may be similar, but not copy.

    Ch 7 'Evolution'
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  • Iam_Cat
    Iam_Cat2yr
    Balas RikySmith123

    I also feel the same and I can tell you that's not the case. In the next chapter all the changes will be explained in detail including emotions.

    And according to 'Livie' as soon as he overcame this sadness he maybe could reach a big step towards perfection but he didn't want that to happen.
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  • Iam_Cat
    Iam_Cat2yr
    Balas Thieving

    He is going to be a mix of Reversed Insanity and Unsealing Emptiness.

    Ch 6 'Essence'
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  • Iam_Cat
    Iam_Cat2yr
    Balas Thieving

    When you read the next few chapters you will understand the reason.

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  • Iam_Cat
    Iam_Cat2yr
    Balas Thieving

    He was a Viking and was always strong. If he alone attacked a werewolf he could win, that's why he was defeated by a group not a single werewolf.

    When Mikael heard about Niklaus, he was going to kill him but 'Esther' begged him so to vent his anger he hunted down and killed all of 'Klaus' family including the alpha of the wolf clan.
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  • Iam_Cat
    Iam_Cat2yr
    Balas Thieving

    I know keeping Plot is important but I will chanage it if it is reqired.

    Mikael was feeling overwhelmed but also happy and was proud of his son,
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    Iam_Cat2yr
    Balas Thieving

    It was important for the plot Of Fan-Fic.

    This all made 'Mikael' more enthusiastic for training him but due to 'Esther' stopping him again and again he conceded with her to start training him from the age of 5.
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    Iam_Cat2yr
    Balas Thieving

    I have made an outline but as the story is moving forward, I am learning many new things while writing it. So I may change some things if it will make the story a better read.

    Three of them stayed in their regions of the multiverse and mostly mediated to improve their control over 'Divine Energy' as none of them had anything too interesting to find out there.
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  • Iam_Cat
    Iam_Cat2yr
    Balas Thieving

    Thanks, I will keep that in mind for future chapters.

    God Of Darkness "Can you? Is it even a question? We have sensed it for the first time but we can still determine it's not from this era."
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    Iam_Cat2yr
    Balas DaoistMade

    Thanks. I will take care of it in future chapters.

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  • Iam_Cat
    Iam_Cat2yr
    Diterbitkan

    Well, I like the story and I have a good development speed. From my perspective, what I like is little more details and some filler scenes will also be good. But overall, starting is good.

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    The Apathetic Queen
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    Iam_Cat2yr
    Balas MrLollip0p

    Thanks

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    Iam_Cat2yr
    Diterbitkan

    Loved the characters model and the world background is interesting.....and minimum grammatical errors, that's what I like and the silent kid Arthur Is good addition. I like it.

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    Iam_Cat2yr
    Diterbitkan

    I think everything is a bit fast and I love grammar so you understand next problem. The character explanation was fine but I like a little more details.

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  • Iam_Cat
    Iam_Cat2yr
    Balas Dcelano

    They will come after some time but they will come. Wait and Read

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    Iam_Cat2yr
    Balas Dcelano

    Sorry for that, It was a spelling mistake from my side and has been corrected. Also thanks for informing.😀😀

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