Review Detail of Iam_Cat in Immortal World System

Item: Immortal World System
Rating: 3.6

Ulasan detail

Iam_CatLv12yrIam_Cat

I think everything is a bit fast and I love grammar so you understand next problem. The character explanation was fine but I like a little more details.

Immortal World System

_Yuvi_

Disukai oleh 2 orang

SUKA

Balasan2

_Yuvi_Penulis_Yuvi_

You will get the answer in the future after all it's still one and half days in the novel..

2yr

PatrioticZLv15PatrioticZ

yeah the grammar is already bad and I am only on the first page so if the author plans of making paid chapters the he should get an editor first

2yr