Thanks, I really do love that anime.

I've always been a fan of visceral violence/ horror mixed with fantasy elements and I feel that this novel delivers. I loved the grotesque details of the actions as well as the implications of the kind of the world this story takes place. While the writing can be good, even phenomenal at points, it can use a bit of polish in sentence structuring. There is also some repetition but not a lot to really hinder the experience. Overall, this is the kind of story that you want to read if you want to clean your palate from the usual fantasy story.

From the very beginning of the story, a lot of care and attention is put into writing the world and character's personality linguistics. However, from the first few chapters the story is very slow paced and can put off readers but that isn't a bad thing considering the skill of the writer. Further down the line, I am confident to say that author will grab your attention.

Your book is really good. the plot is very strong. The arrangements of characters are well. keep it up waiting for the next chapters. I hope you must complete your book.

While the writing and descriptions can be really well done, it does suffer a bit in the aspects of their structure. For instance, the first scentence was way too long and contrived to read it correctly. However, there is clear indication that the writer has care and love for the world he is trying to create

The progression of the story is good and I also enjoyed how romantic the articulation is when describing the characters feelings and appearances but the sentence structures can be a bit off

For it's Genre, this a good contender, the writing is good, the story progression is good. However, while bombastic and great, the action scenes can get confusing. Other than that, good story.

Xy's Tower's lore and background seems very well put and thought, which I'm sure the author has put in a lot of love and care for but as for the writing quality, it does suffer from general grammar mistakes. Other than that a good read.

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Sure, no problem! Ok, I'll give you an example in the first chapter when they are in the party. Instead of giving a paragraph for each character to describe how they are, make their personalities known without really saying how they are. What I mean is give them interactions in the party instead of downright explaining their character. Usually when you explain a character's personalities it dampers the story from progressing.

Thank you I appreciate your words :)

For it's genre, I quite liked this one. The story knows how to take it's time and not rush into certain situations like most others. It's a good read for sure.

The story seemed interesting at the beginning with the MC near psychosis and his horrible grief but the story is takes a sharp turn to the supernatural which I love. However, the story does have a few hiccups with story beats and grammar but they can be easily improved. Other than that, good story!

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I can't speak for the story as a whole but the first few chapters are suffering from grammar mistakes left and right. However, the story is moving alone in a brisk pace. Enough to keep the story moving but the grammar does hinder the experience. Other than that, it does have an interesting set up.

This is my story. If you want to say anything about it, I will gladly accept an sort of feedback on the story or if you just want to talk about it.

Thank you, and hopefully not. Right now, I am just taking a break for the WSA.

As much as I think my own writing is ok, I know I still have a lot of room to improve on. So any sort of critique will help me to become a better writer so I encourage people to tell me what they like or don't like about my novel.

It’s my book so I kind of have to like it. Regardless, if you have any feedback or questions about this story feel free to contact me. Also leave a review, it would help.

When I began reading the story I was a bit confused by the pacing and the certain structures of the sentences because there were glaring differences in quality between sentences. However, bad grammar is easily fixable compared to fixing a bad story and I believe that this story has enough merit to keep entertained and interesting. So if you fixed up some of the grammar, you can easily have a great or even near perfect book.