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EldritchBlade
EldritchBladeLv112yr
2022-08-11 21:21

This review is part of a swap. I got major Evangelion vibes from the cover. When I saw the first chapter's title, I knew I was in for a treat, lol. The writing quality is probably in the top 5% of the whole site. The style is much slower and more introspective than most readers will be used to. This is a grim, dystopian story focused on the main character's internal life. If you enjoy reading "real" books (especially philosophical scifi), definitely give this story a shot.

Plastic Primrose

TonyT
4.9
19 Chs

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TonyT
TonyTAuthor

Thanks, I really do love that anime.

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TonyT
TonyTAuthor

This is my story. If you want to say anything about it, I will gladly accept an sort of feedback on the story or if you just want to talk about it.

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binni_seon
binni_seonLv1

this story is deeply rooted in reality and many can relate to the characters and the raw emotions displayed.kudos to the writing style,it added richness to it..keep up the good work

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Sir_WendoS
Sir_WendoSLv4

Interesting read, I'd say... The first person perspective hooked me in, especially with the way the authors describes the occurring events. Quite early to judge, but honestly, already see great potential from this work[img=recommend]

2yr
safa_bukhari
safa_bukhariLv2

Your book is really good. the plot is very strong. The arrangements of characters are well. keep it up waiting for the next chapters. I hope you must complete your book.

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ZeroX0666
ZeroX0666Lv12

Interesting stuff, even the dark parts were quite interesting to read, I just can't help but want to see more of it. Keep up the good work, and I hope you do well.

2yr
Loctovia
LoctoviaLv15

WoW!!!!.... It is really intense. For a moment , i forgot that i was reading a book and not watching a movie... that is how good it is. The author's writing and depictions of events are very vivid!

2yr
Yanie_Long
Yanie_LongLv2

The descriptions are vivid and you can really feel the emotions as you read. The story development in presice. I enjoy the writting style used.

2yr
AMonarch
AMonarchLv2

A fantastic novel that leaves you eager for new chapters. It's quite early to make any strong statements but I like where the story is going and I'm hoping the updates continue. Keep updating this gem author!

2yr
McCrunch
McCrunchLv10

Great read, The raw emtotion displayed from the Mc point of view is a very nice touch, I really like this writing style. Nothing I could really fault about this. Great work keep it up.

2yr
ThePotatoKing
ThePotatoKingLv14

I was hooked right from the first sentence. The writing quality is extremely amazing. You can feel the author slowly draw you in. At first it's just a basic setup of the world background and about the character's life, then suddenly you are thrust into the middle of a TV broadcast that not only sets the stage for the story by highlighting the current state of the world, it also beings in a personal touch to the motivations driving the main characters. I believe this story has great potential going forward. Best of luck!

2yr
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