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I like the premise and the theme. the writing is also great. you might want to make the synopsis a little bit longer. not too long though. I can foreshadow interesting plot twists. keep up the good work.

oh! it's already completed? 🥸 ....ok somehow ended up here to read this. Since it's sci fi, i was a bit sad at first. but i read. nice.. ..since i am impressed i gave you 5 stars.keep going write more... good luck

I love the story. The synopsis is really Cathy. I totally recommend this book to anyone who wants to read an interesting book! I love love love it!

The world background was great and the characters were well detailed. The writing was also great. However if you really want someone to notice your work, add more in your sypnosis. but the story is great

It was a nice story. the gaps between the dialogs were just right! Conversation between the characters were also good ones. Specially the leads characters were interesting!!

Good story, I'm curious to see how they solve the problem. The development was unexpected. The only drawbacks I could see is the writting style and the relative short chapters. Keep up the good work! 😊 Btw, look up Svalbard seed vault.

i enjoyed reading it, it's very interesting story. i would love to see this book succeed. it's a new concept good luck with it[img=recommend]

I love the storyline and I will recommend it to anyone looking for an interesting book. Great work 👌👌

Hurts that the story just abruptly ended however I'll be waiting for Armageddon like you said

Okay when I strated reading the first few sentences I was like flowers? is it really about flowers? but the more I read the more I got hooked. Amazing! Amazing! I can say the book is totally different from what we readers are used to and thats what makes it even more interesting the fact that something so different could be so interesting goes to show how the author is so capable, from the plot, the characters the introduction, nothing contradicts the other. This book has opened my eyes to a whole new reading experience and I cannot wait for more of the chapters from the author.

An interesting and unique premise that mirrors a lot of possible real and current crises. Lets see how it plays out! I hope we get a lot of technical depth with relation to the story in the future

It was really really good Author. Sometimes I get confused. Still overall was good. keep going Author. 👋🏻

The storyline and the characters themselves are well done. I like it, however, if you want, you can add a picture to your book cover to make it more eye-catching. Best of luck with this book, and please don't stop writing this fantastic work.🤗

This book is interesting to read and it is mainly because of the directness of the author's writing style, which is totally unique. Do try to update this book. Apology not accepted.

Well, I like it, but if you want, Well, I like it, but bro you can make your book cover more captivating by uploading an image as your title was intriguing enough to get me to read it, and the synopsis was also engaging. The potential for your narrative is good. Well done author👍

the premise are really intresting to say hoever its sadly this story is short lived, i get your readon fot why for dropping this story, but i do know for one thing thst this story have some potentail to be greater than it is, from the etiting nneds more improvement and the characters as well. overall keep on writing, i like it where people try sow their etiting out to the public [img=recommend]

Heya, so this is pretty interesting but there's just a few things I'll say. Firstly it's not bad to have conversation but it feels as if there's a lot more conversation than descriptions of what's actually happening. The setting, as in the world background and character descriptions seem a bit vague. Like maybe it's just your style but giving some things a bit more description would make the work feel a little more grounded, for example in terms of ministries there's a minister of Agriculture, a minister of Forest, Fisheries and the environment and one for Higher Education and Science in my country anyway. Sometimes things based on a bit of reality can give a story a lot of detail. There's only a few things to be fixed in terms and that, also checking the flow as you go along to make sure that even the conversation that is there doesn't sound stiff. Most importantly, keep writing! Hope this helps [img=recommend]

I'm the author, so I will surely review my book. I know it has some errors but it's my first book as an author on Webnovel. I might(emphasis on might) start a new novel this December, "The Armageddon," which may be succeeded by another book. Again, emphasis on might. My school work may not permit me to write another book, sadly 😭😭. Thanks so much for reading this! 😁😁😁 Love you dear readers!

Although its a little bit early to review a story but still wanted to do it...Its a very well written and have a nice story plot... The story line is good as the characters are itself... All the best for this novel and don't stop writing this awesome book..

It was a very good book for someone your age, the chapter where you described the reactions of Nigerians to the situation was funny, but don't you think it was a bit stereotypical to think that Africans wouldn't be able to find the problem? I also feel like the characters could use a whole lot of development, for example what was Erik's motivation, what was dark laboratories really, who is the protagonist, and what is his/her backstory, I think this book has the potential to become waayyy bigger than what it is now, just a few touches here and there and you are ready to go! You're going places!!