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0MashroomLv32yr
2022-10-28 01:03

the premise are really intresting to say hoever its sadly this story is short lived, i get your readon fot why for dropping this story, but i do know for one thing thst this story have some potentail to be greater than it is, from the etiting nneds more improvement and the characters as well. overall keep on writing, i like it where people try sow their etiting out to the public [img=recommend]

Without Its Beauty

somi_n
4.6
10 Chs

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somi_n
somi_nAuthor

I'm dropping my other book not this one tho. Thanks for the correction, I will make sure to see to my errors. Thanks a bunch😁😁

2yr
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Husniya_S
Husniya_SLv12

I like the premise and the theme. the writing is also great. you might want to make the synopsis a little bit longer. not too long though. I can foreshadow interesting plot twists. keep up the good work.

2yr

Sweet_Vanilla553
Sweet_Vanilla553Lv13

oh! it's already completed? 🥸 ....ok somehow ended up here to read this. Since it's sci fi, i was a bit sad at first. but i read. nice.. ..since i am impressed i gave you 5 stars.keep going write more... good luck

2yr
Mercy_xx
Mercy_xxLv1

I love the story. The synopsis is really Cathy. I totally recommend this book to anyone who wants to read an interesting book! I love love love it!

2yr
Night_of_Dreams
Night_of_DreamsLv4

The world background was great and the characters were well detailed. The writing was also great. However if you really want someone to notice your work, add more in your sypnosis. but the story is great

2yr
Violi
VioliLv1

It was a nice story. the gaps between the dialogs were just right! Conversation between the characters were also good ones. Specially the leads characters were interesting!!

2yr
Cristina_5911
Cristina_5911Lv12

Good story, I'm curious to see how they solve the problem. The development was unexpected. The only drawbacks I could see is the writting style and the relative short chapters. Keep up the good work! 😊 Btw, look up Svalbard seed vault.

2yr
DaasWolfe
DaasWolfeLv11

i enjoyed reading it, it's very interesting story. i would love to see this book succeed. it's a new concept good luck with it[img=recommend]

2yr
Grace_Harley1
Grace_Harley1Lv3

I love the storyline and I will recommend it to anyone looking for an interesting book. Great work 👌👌

2yr
Daarcsign_07
Daarcsign_07Lv3

Hurts that the story just abruptly ended however I'll be waiting for Armageddon like you said

2yr
Emarleetah
EmarleetahLv12

Okay when I strated reading the first few sentences I was like flowers? is it really about flowers? but the more I read the more I got hooked. Amazing! Amazing! I can say the book is totally different from what we readers are used to and thats what makes it even more interesting the fact that something so different could be so interesting goes to show how the author is so capable, from the plot, the characters the introduction, nothing contradicts the other. This book has opened my eyes to a whole new reading experience and I cannot wait for more of the chapters from the author.

2yr
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