Item: Without Its Beauty
Rating: 3.2

0MashroomLv32yr

2022-10-28 01:03

the premise are really intresting to say hoever its sadly this story is short lived, i get your readon fot why for dropping this story, but i do know for one thing thst this story have some potentail to be greater than it is, from the etiting nneds more improvement and the characters as well. overall keep on writing, i like it where people try sow their etiting out to the public [img=recommend]

Without Its Beauty

somi_n

4.6

10 Chs

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somi_nAuthor

I'm dropping my other book not this one tho. Thanks for the correction, I will make sure to see to my errors. Thanks a bunch😁😁

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