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From the first chapter: Simply amazing I must say. I had never really invested myself into the horror genre books. But this one surely did piqued my interest. The sense of mystery at the end of the first chapter. 10/10

The plot is nice and good, the mysteries are intriguing too. There's a point where I was confused but nonetheless it's a very good novel with solid plot.

interesting and caugh my attention. I understand this storyline. the atmosphere is also starting to feel. I can only give 1 suggestion. usually "calm before thunderstorm". Just reading a few chapters made me happy. don't forget to add spices that can make your readers' hearts beat fast and are typical of horror. but this alone is good. I like it... 😊👍❤

I like the plot, and what you've come up with. Just one thing, you could make it more fluid? No need to write it out it's happening in front of the building, make us read it... give her the action. Keep it up!

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I really love this novel because of the story line and characters. The writing quality is also great and the plot is, like, AMAZING. Definitely recommend it. I could also see how much you love horror just by your choice of words and scenes. You're a gifted author, I hope you realize that and keep on posting. PS: Added to library!

The characters here seems well written and have good potential. Up to chapter 4 the suspense is kept well. I'm looking forward to read future chapters and learn what made this characters act how they are acting.

I can see that you your self like horror by the way you write. The story is something amazing so far, what really stood out to me where the characters and their decisions. So far so good! The story has potential keep it up!

A good read. The story itself has potential to be something trully amazing, the plot seems promising through out the 2 chapters and the character's are life like which is good at the reader's interpretation. Overall i liked the story.

Loved the story. The plot is amazing and the first chapter hooked me. The emotions of the characters are delivered well. Good job author. I will keep on reading the story.

Good storyline with continuous tension. The mystery is well kept. My only complaint is that, the chapters can be a bit longer. Other than that the story itself is good. Keep writing more exciting episodes!

I have to say that, this novel has a quite interesting and intriguing plot going on. The concept of unknown and mystery, is quite refreshing and amazing. I can see, this novel has a great potential ahead. Besides that, I really appreciate the creativity and insight of author. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK, DEAR AUTHOR. This novel is landing straight into my library, I will keep on reading it :)

The story is well written and progresses at the right pace. The dialogues are emotional, gripping, sharp and this is well enhanced by the protagonists. The suspense is of course there as well as the progression of the story. Added to my bookstore

Very interesting concept, well written. I love it a lot and I will definitely recommend it to anyone that is interested in mystery novels 🤗🤗🤗

As an author, I could say that the skill of this author is on a level of its own..... I loved the way how there was this constant sense of mystery lingering as I was reading the Chapters...if you are reading this comment and can't decide whether to give this a try or not.....ill say just give it a try, you won't regret it.

had to leave a reveiw... this was super well written and I have to point that out. most authors on WN don't care enough to write a really amazing peice of literature but this author did, and i have to comment that. as for the story, great fling story, the MC is a bit emotional and reactionary but aren't we all? it's very human and very real and I love it.

Ding, ding ding 😌. I love the name. It's insightful, already saying what the book is about. [img=recommend]. Very promising and worth it. Good luck author ❤️

The dire atmosphere is well manipulated, and I'm very fond of the pace of the scenes. The writing is also quite easy to sift through but perhaps a few commas here and there would allow the text to flow better. Overall, with the vivid images I earn myself when reading, it's a good read.

The story is actually good and thought wonderfully, there's a lot of tension in the way you write which is good because I can feel how the story goes. The only problems inn your story is the lack of use of other punctuations, if you use things such as comma, semi-colon, colon, any many more on your story it can make the flow of some readers okay.