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2021-10-05 03:56

The dire atmosphere is well manipulated, and I'm very fond of the pace of the scenes. The writing is also quite easy to sift through but perhaps a few commas here and there would allow the text to flow better. Overall, with the vivid images I earn myself when reading, it's a good read.

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Thank you for your kind words! I'll try to do better punctuation from next chapter!

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