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Reincarnated in Eos, a world of sword and magic, Julian finds himself reborn in the arms of a loving family and serene environment. However, while peaceful at first, his life takes a thrilling and adventurous turn when dangerous revelations plunge him into a world of violent chaos. Read as Julian navigates the wonders of Eos, meeting the strongest of Gods and the weakest of mortals, all of whom teach him valuable lessons that sculpt his personality from that of a naive and weak willed boy, to an unparalleled force of nature.

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Chapter 1Befuddling Rebirth

Lightning and thunder chased one another in the sky. Lightning flashed and disappeared spontaneously leaving behind the roaring thunder frustrated at its escape.

Rain drops fled the clouds in fear of the harbingers of storms and the seas turned turbulent as the wind furiously howled, unwilling to be outdone by the flashy duo; it stirred up a tempest.

Amidst the onslaught of this chaos, a tiny orange structure tried its best to navigate the deadly sea.

Inside this structure, seven individuals were bundled up in blankets drenched in water. Only two of which wore life jackets; a woman with a bulging belly and an elderly man whose hollow eyes showed the graveness of their situation. The rest simply held on to the raft firmly as the white of their knuckles prominently showed.

Amongst these unfortunate souls was a young man named Julian.

Julian's light brown hair has long since turned many shades darker as the seawater splashed his face. His dark brown eyes scanned the raft with vigilance as he wearily eyed the other passengers.

Aside from the two behind him who occupied the life jackets, he considered the rest a threat.

There were three men whose features screamed their ill intentions and one other woman who was looking forward to grasp any opportunity given to her to survive.

While Julian was no better than the opportunistic woman, he at least was not plotting to snatch the life jackets off of their current owners.

In Julian's eyes, his fate was sealed long ago, when he failed to secure himself a life jacket before evacuating the ship. And much like the four others, and he would most definitely die in this storm. Yet, the woman and the elderly man behind him, whom he got to know on the cruise ship, were different. Julian put his hands behind him defensively as he shielded his companions.

"You don't have to do this!" Julian shouted. Blood trickled down his throat as it bled. He was parched, no one had eaten or drunken a thing in a day and a half.

There was no reply, only scowling faces.

Two of the men held him by his hands and the last delivered a mean punch to his face.

Julian was no fighter, at best he could take a swing or two and be lucky enough to hit one of them. But in this situation, with minimal sleep and no food in roughly the last two days, he was not able to put up a fight at all.

Before long, under his own muffled screams and those behind him, his vision blurred and his breathing became ragged and rough. The last thing he remembered before he blacked out, was the feeling of cold water on his skin as he was chucked out the raft. His last thoughts were a mix of anger, regret and relief.

It was supposed to be the end, he was not supposed to be breathing again, much less see anything. He was no longer among the living but the dead. Yet, what was happening in front of Julian was simply, impossible… or so he thought.

His vision was blurry, yet from what he could make out, he was in a spacious room where a giant woman-like figure was holding him.

He could not make out any special features of hers, yet he instinctively felt the gentleness she exuded.

Moments later, he was being passed around from one giant to another! Unable to overcome his distraught mind, he succumbed to the fatigue that was creeping up to him.

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In the same room Julian woke up to, a fierce voice shouted.

"Isaac don't hold him that way!" An aqua blue haired woman wiped the beads of sweat trickling down her face as she motioned to the man opposite to her.

"Aurora honey, don't worry I've got him"

Not two seconds later, the man "Who's got him" dropped the baby in his hands, only for a small whirlwind of green energy to float it back up.

Aurora, or previously identified as the giant woman by Julian, gave her husband a fierce glare and with a flick of her wrist, sent a blob of water towards him.

Isaac's wry smile twitched as water slowly trickled down his temple and weighed on his lashes

Mumbling to himself, he handed her the baby and retreated to the corner of the room to grab a towel.

'It's not like he fell or anything....'

While Isaac was brooding in the corner of the room thinking about how to appease his wife, four women entered the room briefly after knocking.

These women looked quite young and were garbed in black and white maid outfits all with the exception of the woman leading them. The woman in question, had an aged face and a much more refined demeanor, she wore a simple grey gown and a headdress.

A breath of relief escaped Aurora's mouth as she lay her eyes upon the leading woman.

"Sophia please be a dear and take care of these bed sheets. Oh, and have someone grab Isaac a tunic as well."she said, chuckling lightly as she said the last part, a bit of mischief finding its way to her tone.

"Of course Madame" with a simple gesture of her hand, the older woman, Sophia, motioned for the four young women behind her to start their work.

"Have you decided on a name, my love?"asked Isaac as he approached his wife, weary of another unexpected shower.

Aurora narrowed her eyes slightly before she nodded at her husband, granting him a temporary reprieve from his punishment.

Looking back at the bundle of life within her arms, Aurora felt a flood of love engorge her chest and a name suddenly etch into her mind.

"Elias, Elias Lyndell".

From a far, Sophia glanced at the three, while her eyes softened and her lips tugged at their ends ever so slightly forming a faint smile. It lasted but a moment before her gaze turned somber and melancholic, she fixed the glasses adorning her eyes and returned to her duties.

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Reincarnated With Three Unique Skills

[ Congratulations on receiving the following Unique Skills: – Appraisal (Basic) – Skill Absorption (Mythic) – Universal Synthesis (Ultimate) ] _____________________________________ "Synthesis Skills: Swift Sword Strike + Fire Toad's Breath." [ Ding! ] [ Congratulations! Your Skill Synthesis was successful ] [ Your skills evolved into: Azula Sword Strike ] "Synthesis Materials: Titanium Runic Sword + Wyvern Bones" [ Congratulations! You Synthesis was successful. Your Sword has evolved into Skeletal Dragon Sword ] _________________________________ In a heart-wrenching tale of loneliness and despair, Ethan's life has been one of unending tragedy. Orphaned at a young age and tormented by a relentless terminal illness, he spent his final days confined to a cold, confined hospital room. As he takes his last breath, he awakened in a mysterious void, where Ethan is given the opportunity to choose three unique skills that will define his new existence. With millions of options but only three choices, he carefully selects his path, setting the stage for an extraordinary journey of Reincarnation. Reincarnated into a fantastical world filled with magical Skills, powerful beings, and untold dangers, Ethan must navigate his new life, wielding the skills he chose to survive and thrive in a realm where anything is possible. But the question remains: Will this second life bring him the happiness and purpose he was denied in his first, or will it lead him down an even darker path? Chapter release: 2 chs/day Guys, its my first time writing, and it might not suit everyone. I can only say sorry in advance. Thanks for reading!

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Initial thought: The writing quality appears to be solid, with clear and descriptive language that effectively conveys the events and emotions of the story. The story development thus far has introduced several interesting concepts, such as the concept of Aeter and Aeter beast companions, as well as the diverse magical races and continents of the world of Eos. The character design for the main character, Elias, seems well-rounded and his interactions with his family and Aeter beast companions are engaging and provide insight into his personality. The world background provided in these chapters is intriguing, with the introduction of different magical races and the concept of Aeter, but there is not yet enough information to fully evaluate the depth and complexity of the world-building. Overall, the first five chapters show promise and have left me interested in learning more about the story and world of this novel. Writing Quality: 4 Overall, the writing quality in this novel is good. The descriptions are detailed and vivid, and the dialogue between the characters is natural and flows well. There are a few instances where the writing feels a bit clunky or awkward, such as when Sophia is explaining the concept of Aeter companions to Elias. However, these instances are few and far between, and overall the writing is strong. Story Development: 4 (Went from 3 to 4 since I have wrote this review based on only 5 chapters.) While the story has potential, it feels like it is just starting to get going in these five chapters. The plot is introduced in a somewhat confusing way, with the main character seemingly remembering his past life and then using magic in an unexpected way. It's not entirely clear what the main conflict or goal of the story will be, though hints are given about the main character's parents being in danger. The pacing is also a bit slow, with much of the first few chapters devoted to world-building and character development. Character Design: 4 The characters in this novel are well-developed and have distinct personalities. Elias is a curious and mature child, Sophia is a strict yet caring grandmother, and Isaac is a boisterous and affectionate father. Aurora, the mother, is a bit more mysterious and seems to be hiding something from Elias. The Aeter beasts, Kyra and Otso, are also well-developed and have distinct personalities. Kyra is gentle and nurturing, while Otso is boisterous and playful. World Background: 5 The world-building in this novel is excellent. The continent of Acacia and its diverse races are described in great detail, and the concept of Aeter beasts and their role in society is explained clearly. The different magic elements and their applications are also well-explained, and the history of the world is hinted at through references to Gaia and Typhon. Overall, the world of Eos feels fully-realized and immersive.

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