The Alpha in the MCU (old)

It's ridiculous for an alpha with over 1000 pack members to try to find someone like an errand dog. So much wealth, so much servant, political power, influence, military power, James himself is running around like a mercenary looking for stardom. Beta mc search dog mc The character's growth, development, marriage and the wars they experience are skipped. The character is introduced as a side character. There is no character development. There is no world background introduction. Bad writing. Lots of logical errors.

Don't waste your time... At chapter 1 the Mc is a nobody, at chapter 2 he is the richest and powerful man with 1.000 members on his pack. No development, the author just threw the information on us and we have to accept it 👎

It could be better, to begin with it's not fun to read about a bad-tempered protagonist, I don't want to read a Logan 2.0, so why make a reincarnating protagonist if his personality is similar to the original Logan; second, it is said that his organization works in the shadows but at the beginning of the novel it is said that they do not make an effort to hide, furthermore, it could not be more cliché, a protagonist who does not like to attract attention, this is seen in 90 % of webnovel MCs.

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I'm speechless as to how bad this is, it's an info dump rather than a story and just straight up tells summary of movies with 2-3 repeating lines with context being I have worked hard and I'm reborn

I like it is better than not having any power and always relying on system it's good to new type of Logan who is not doing everything solo instead an organisation money power people it's great

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You don't see a lot of Logan fics and this one is pretty good so far.

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I wish there was a fan-fic where one is reincarnated as Victor Creed, half brother to Wolverine. He gets adamantium/vibranium in his body to surpress his natural mutation from changing and would look like The Xmen Origins Victor Creed. Not a review but an Idea that I want to pitch to the author(or anybody). Would be interesting to see his relationship with Logan.

The story has potential to be great, just hoping the author won't drop. Though the story is entertaining, it can be more better. All The Best🙏

Great Concept. Something refreshing. Maybe slightly longer chapters tho? Because story doesn’t progress much otherwise short chapters feel like story has no depth and just speeding through plot

although the last chapters are good, we can't forget the first chapters done in ultra fast mode where other stories (5 star stories) would have dragged out the construction of the mc in 30/50 chapters there it was done in 2, and still one in truth)

I like it a lot. The plot, the Mc, and his powers are very interesting. Harem or no harem, the story will come out great. keep it up boss, ur doing great!

I like it, but I don't like how it wasn't shown how he got his wealth and pack, it was too rushed, but with the rest I liked it.

I like it so it’s a 5/5………………………………………..to everyone else

was a pretty good if alittle fast paced fanfic. till the author just threw everything in the trash and started over. The next fanfic set in one of the world wars is sooo OVER DONE ive read at least 5 of them that have wolverine in one of the world wars and it always get boring in 5- 10 chapters.

Well it's great and genuinely different from the Wolverine we know op and he has power money people to do his bidding and he slapped the face of one eyed bald headed pirate that it's make it worth reading and I am appreciating it