It's ridiculous for an alpha with over 1000 pack members to try to find someone like an errand dog. So much wealth, so much servant, political power, influence, military power, James himself is running around like a mercenary looking for stardom. Beta mc search dog mc The character's growth, development, marriage and the wars they experience are skipped. The character is introduced as a side character. There is no character development. There is no world background introduction. Bad writing. Lots of logical errors.

Don't waste your time... At chapter 1 the Mc is a nobody, at chapter 2 he is the richest and powerful man with 1.000 members on his pack. No development, the author just threw the information on us and we have to accept it 👎

It could be better, to begin with it's not fun to read about a bad-tempered protagonist, I don't want to read a Logan 2.0, so why make a reincarnating protagonist if his personality is similar to the original Logan; second, it is said that his organization works in the shadows but at the beginning of the novel it is said that they do not make an effort to hide, furthermore, it could not be more cliché, a protagonist who does not like to attract attention, this is seen in 90 % of webnovel MCs.

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I'm speechless as to how bad this is, it's an info dump rather than a story and just straight up tells summary of movies with 2-3 repeating lines with context being I have worked hard and I'm reborn

I like it is better than not having any power and always relying on system it's good to new type of Logan who is not doing everything solo instead an organisation money power people it's great

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You don't see a lot of Logan fics and this one is pretty good so far.

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