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Strongest Elementalist: Runic System Descent

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As the chosen bearer of the Elementalist system, Ruvian dedicated his life to the path of a knight, guided by the Alliance. However, when he lost his life during the war, the Alliance decided to bury his heroic history. Peace was restored under a white lie. A demonic warlock then managed to reanimate Ruvian, merging its soul with the soulless body. However, Ruvian's heart remained true. He thrived to see the world after the war and to find out about his diminishing power. Until he met a troublesome white-haired girl who constantly gave him headaches...

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The Runic Alchemist

Ben, a postgraduate chemistry student, envisions a future where science unlocks the secrets of the universe. But fate has other plans. In a sudden twist, Ben dies and awakens in a strange new world, reborn as a five-year-old boy named Damian Sunblade. Damian's joy at being part of a noble family is short-lived. His family, valuing gold over blood, sells him off to another noble house to be groomed as a homemaker husband, a mere pawn in their political games. Struggling with his new reality and the remnants of his past life’s knowledge, Damian refuses to succumb to his fate. In his new household, Damian discovers that this world is governed by magic circles, Runic symbols wielding immense power. Driven by his scientific curiosity, Damian begins to experiment. Applying the laws of physics to the Rune symbols, he deciphers their secrets and invents his own unique form of magic. However, The family that bought him has their own plans for him, seeing Damian as a valuable tool to enhance their power. But Damian, ever the independent spirit, has dreams beyond servitude. He longs for freedom, a place to call his own—a life where he can use his talents without restraint. And so Damian devises a daring plan to escape. His journey is fraught with danger and intrigue, as he navigates a world filled with mystical creatures, powerful adversaries, and ancient secrets. Along the way, he forges alliances and battles enemies, all while refining his magical and scientific skills. In "The Runic Alchemist," follow Damian Sunblade’s epic quest for independence and self-discovery. Witness his transformation from a forsaken child to a formidable Alchemist, determined to carve out an extraordinary future for himself in a world teeming with infinite possibilities. ***** Author Note : Hello! GlaringError here! As I have already mentioned in my author review I am restating it here since I am getting tons of comments about it, that I am more of a reader myself than a writer, I made this novel in an attempt to capture my fantasy world residing in my mind into words.. Writing is new for me.. The premise of my novel is inspired by many great works that I have loved over the years. And some elements I have in my novel that are slightly similar to them but it's just the skeleton of it, the real meat of the plot is entirely my own cooking. Some of the influence that is more noticeable is from The Runesmith (By Kuropon), The King's Avatar (By Butterfly Blue) and Shadow Slave (By Guiltythree). I have immense respect for these legends and I can only hope to follow in their footsteps. To all those who comment just by judging the name, at least give it a chance before letting your opinions known. Thank you.

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I've been stuck at the 10th chapter for a long time already. And i think i'll just stop forcing myself to push forward with this book. *The pros : - The magic system is innovative . - The Mc has a mysterious background. - The writing quality is above average and i didn’t spot many mistakes( if any). - The chapters aren't too short nor too long. *The cons : - The story is difficult to understand. The best way to describe this story would be : confusing ( at least where i was at). This "vis" system is not really explained and everything just goes along like that. While i agree with the " letting your readers understand for themselves " way, sometimes it's better to state clearly what is happening and how things function. It might not be a cons for some who are patient enough though. And i could have overlooked this too. However, the remaining points made it so that i simply couldn’t be interested enough in the story to even wait for clarifications. - The characters are not interesting. The Mc seems sympathetic. And i even appreciate the handicap that was given to him( he is blind). However that's all there is to him. I would never say it enough but the Mc is the person that introduces us to the story. If he is easily defined by a single characteristic, most importantly in, the beginning of a story, it in turns , makes the story as bland as he is. The Mc in this book is sympathetic and seems to drag behind him a mysterious past. However he is not intriguing enough and is rather bland. A proof of that is that i'm only in the 10 first chapters but i'm not invested enough and want to drop the book. Now for the side characters , there’s that girl whose motivations and past are told. But i'm also uninterested in her. - The pace is slow. I feel like nothing really important happens in the chapters. And i guess it's because everything seems so slow and devoid of feelings or life. I don't know but this story lacks that special something that makes a story engaging and lively. All these points made me lose interest in the story. Still , it has a great concept. But the way the ideas are executed doesn’t tell about it. Finally, i whish the author good luck with his/her book and futur books.

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