Awesome start and world building. The detailed parts were the best and I really liked the basic plot as well. Keep up the good work author. Leaving a 4.8

I've been stuck at the 10th chapter for a long time already. And i think i'll just stop forcing myself to push forward with this book. *The pros : - The magic system is innovative . - The Mc has a mysterious background. - The writing quality is above average and i didn’t spot many mistakes( if any). - The chapters aren't too short nor too long. *The cons : - The story is difficult to understand. The best way to describe this story would be : confusing ( at least where i was at). This "vis" system is not really explained and everything just goes along like that. While i agree with the " letting your readers understand for themselves " way, sometimes it's better to state clearly what is happening and how things function. It might not be a cons for some who are patient enough though. And i could have overlooked this too. However, the remaining points made it so that i simply couldn’t be interested enough in the story to even wait for clarifications. - The characters are not interesting. The Mc seems sympathetic. And i even appreciate the handicap that was given to him( he is blind). However that's all there is to him. I would never say it enough but the Mc is the person that introduces us to the story. If he is easily defined by a single characteristic, most importantly in, the beginning of a story, it in turns , makes the story as bland as he is. The Mc in this book is sympathetic and seems to drag behind him a mysterious past. However he is not intriguing enough and is rather bland. A proof of that is that i'm only in the 10 first chapters but i'm not invested enough and want to drop the book. Now for the side characters , there’s that girl whose motivations and past are told. But i'm also uninterested in her. - The pace is slow. I feel like nothing really important happens in the chapters. And i guess it's because everything seems so slow and devoid of feelings or life. I don't know but this story lacks that special something that makes a story engaging and lively. All these points made me lose interest in the story. Still , it has a great concept. But the way the ideas are executed doesn’t tell about it. Finally, i whish the author good luck with his/her book and futur books.

Everything looks great. The writing quality is very high and readable. The characters seem developed and have a great amount of depth to them, and the fact action paced fight in chapter 1 was enjoyable. Leaving a 4.8 with great expectations for this novel.

One aspect I particularly enjoyed about this novel is its vivid and descriptive nature; it evoked the feeling of watching an anime. Every emotion and description was perfectly positioned, enhancing the reading experience. I enjoyed reading this work and anticipate continued enjoyment. The main character is highly likable and intriguing, although I must confess that Adelle is personally my favorite. Set fire to the rain, Adelle! 🙌 Furthermore, the consistent updates and the well-crafted writing contribute to the overall stability of the story. The plot twists and cliffhangers are sure to surprise you. You can count me as a devoted reader! 👏🏻

I have always wanted to read a novel about magic. Until now, this one caught my attention. I believe that this novel has great potential. It's just that the streams of events happen very quickly. The characters are well written. If the author continues to improve himself, I'm sure his future works will be outstanding. I’m waiting for the next chapters. !!