Mickaelle09

I was thrilled by the rythm of the first chapter! It was dynamic and the Mc was introduced so smoothly that I held high hopes for the book's developement. Alas, that good penmanship was replaced by an uninspired one in the second chapter. And unfortunately, it is not the only problem there is. Right after his death, some goddess appeared out of nowhere and amongst all the dead people in the world decided to save our poor Mc. At that point I already wanted to drop. But I clung on because of what that mesmerizing first chapter had sold me. But yet again , I was disappointed. Because the plot is just your typical" get reincarnated into a medieval fantastic world and save it" . What is even worse is that the first chapter seems useless now, because all the important informations can be found in the second chapter , which by the way , is unnecessarily long for what it tries to convey. All in all , I think the author needs to put more efforts into creating original ideas and bringing them to fruition.

Then author , I believe you should have mentioned earlier that even among demons , soul projection is incredibly rare .

Still the , book is interesting as long as you don't think too deeply

The fights in this book would have been better if a clear powerscale was designed. Here , we only know that that demon Guy is strong but we don't know how unbearably strong he is compaired to Mc and the others. Also, Mc himself , who just got his powers some weeks ago can already use them like this?! Are ability a think that doesn't need training to be used so proefficiently? None of that has been specified so it just gives the impression that the author didn't think toroughly on this matter. They are many more problems but I guess I need to make a review to further explain them.

living their best life I see 😁

Thanks for the correction 😁

I have a feeling this author , this book and I will get along very well ^^

Thank you. I'm not a native english speaker so I might have misunderstood the sentence.

😂

You'll stop wanting that when your fav character will be the one to die