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Star Wars: General

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A mutant clone whose experiment has gone awry, was given the ability to use the force and also became the 1st clone to have the position of General! Given that he is a reincarnate, he possesses information of the future... What will he do!? __________________ Plot directly starts at the beginning of the Clone Wars! Also, I don’t know all the Star War’s lore, so if I miss some crucial details or something, I don’t mind constructive criticism! This is a rewrite of my previous Star Wars fanfic that I wrote before taking a break. Well enjoy!, Luxuriant~

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Buen comienzo pero con fallas obvias como no tiene sentido que sidous no lo entrene el las habilidades del lado oscuro segundo en star wars usar el lado oscuro es usar emociones negativas con la fuerza i un jedi o otro usario de del la fuerza depende de lo opuesto que en esencia es autocontrol de tus emociones no necesariamente tiene que ignorar eso esta basado en el budismo que se trata de alcanzar la felicidad de uno mismo a. Traves de la meditacion i la comprension de uno mismo , asi lo quiso george lucas segundo problema saber usar ninguna forma de combate de luz i luchar con puro instinto i ni mencionar los midiclorianos que representa la velocidad de aprendizaje físico i su conexión con la fuerza por cierto yoda posee 19 mil midiclorian i anakin 25 mil obi wan 15 windu 18.900 los midiclorians son como el talento físico i lo fuerte que es tu conexión con la fuerza al pero eso no significa que no puede ser poderoso pero que le tomará mucho entrenamiento para llegar a ser muy poderoso pero uno tiene que alinearse con un aspecto de la fuerza el lado oscuro vuelve a sus usuarios crueles egoístas malvados hasta el punto de matar a sus seres queridos i personas inocentes por poder ya que se alimenta de las deshinibiciones de la moral i la humanidad cuanto más sufrimiento.odio ira sienta i cause el usuario más fuerte será su conexión con el lado oscuro de la fuerza darth sidious describió el lado oscuro como una llama que tiene que ser alimentada o sino destruye a sus usuarios mientras que el lado luminoso mientras meditar i entrenar busque alcanzar la paz interior como hizo obiwan el la serie kenobi más fuerte será tu conexión co el lado luminoso de la fuerza

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