James_Horn

I can say it is alright there are definitely parts that are not fluid in but overall it is better then the ones that are usually reupdated

alright I will look forward to it

just pick one already and keep it

not worth reading with how short the chapters are

this is something you should read only if your really bored and have nothing to do and trying to go to slèep

nothing has been written so far probably never will don't get your hopes up

it is a rewrite but it does sound better so far the the old one

it is cauldron not crucible

same to you

I don't feel like it is comprehension instead seems like summoning