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Returning from the Immortal World

Penulis: Jing Ye Ji Si
Magical Realism
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A supreme expert in the Immortal World had died, and a strand of his soul returned to its original body on Earth. Tang Xiu discovered with amazement that ten thousand years passed in the Immortal World, yet only a single year passed on Earth.

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Awakening the Daily Intelligence System

Thirty years old—that was the age people often referred to as the time to stand tall and firm. At this age, some were splendid and dazzling, intoxicated in a world of wealth, while others were desolate and dim, confined to rope beds and clay stoves. Lin Mo belonged to the latter. At thirty, he was still a porter, toiling away to earn a living. His daughter was bullied by a male classmate at school—simply because his family was well-off, the school chose to turn a blind eye. His wife, already pregnant, was secretly working at a supermarket to supplement the household income without his knowledge. As he lay awake looking at his wife by his side and his daughter sleeping soundly in the little bed, Lin Mo felt so aggrieved he shed tears. Despite working hard every day until his back could no longer straighten, he still couldn't change the dire state of their lives. However, it was at this time that the Daily Intelligence System suddenly awoke. [Daily Intelligence has been updated] [1. Neighbor Wang Youcai secretly used his retirement funds to tip 10,000 yuan to a beauty in a live stream under the nickname Black Chicken.] [2. The police will perform a surprise inspection at the Red Romance Foot Bath at 12 o'clock tonight.] [3. Victory Bird will launch a ground assault against Hass in three days.] [4. The pet dog from 1402, Unit 1, Building 5 of Earth Garden Community is missing, and its owner Li Xiaoru is offering a 10,000 yuan reward for its return.] [5. The pet dog belonging to Li Xiaoru that went missing is trapped in a sewage drain on Development Road.] [6…] Initially, Lin Mo just wanted to use this system to make a bit of extra cash to alleviate his stifling life.

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hottiegamer
hottiegamerLv5hottiegamer

“Books are the quietest and most constant of friends; they are the most accessible and wisest of counselors, and the most patient of teachers.”

BalladKing
BalladKingLv5BalladKing

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noBiggie
noBiggieLv15noBiggie

It’s a typical Chinese novel reinforcing all the Modern Chinese culture and their sneering all over. And BINGO! a Chinese auth hating Japanese, portraying them as evil. Frankly I just don’t like the idea of political hate creeping into any book that’s not historical book. Especially fantasy novels. By the amount of “Chinese medicine” solving anything plot armour throws at MC, his silence till all the side characters fill up the exposition and everyone’s sneering, short fused temper( not the Chinese novel temper, calm, deep, vigorous, spring, autumn, distinguishing gratitude, not being servile not overbearing, sharp eyebrows, and massive hard on for betting at every plot cliche) it repeats all over again. But when I saw auth bringing in Japanese to make them steal their military data, sure, the japs really need it. Anyway, you can read it to increase lethargy.

IOP
IOPLv6IOP

Almost 6months.... damn you QI for ruining this good novel hope udeze is still the translator..........................................................

MiddleEastern
MiddleEasternLv4MiddleEastern

Review of the first 15 chapters ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If someone were to live for 10 thousand years, then his actions would be very different from a normal human. Our MC supposedly lived that long and yet acts like kid, it's mentioned times how arrogant he was in his previous life and how strong willed he was and yet again act like a kid. Somewhere in the story he get kicked out of his class and he gets shocked, i don't see why a 10 thousand year old Being, who fully knew how bad he was performing and how his teachers hated him gets shocked by such decisions. His background is just for show and never really reflects on him. The story doesn't adds up, its like the author had bunch of ideas but didn't know how to stick them together so he just decided to mention all of them without making a relation.

ken878
ken878Lv10ken878

I like how Gravity Tales gave us 757 chapters without spending any thing to read them and on webnovel you have to spend 10+ spirit stones to read 1 chapter after that. Probably going to have to wait until next year for the chapters to get up to there to be open for free.

JulianneDragonhope
JulianneDragonhopeLv4JulianneDragonhope

Many mistakes while reading the story. Mostly grammatical but sometimes it's so bad that it makes the whole sentence have little to no meaning. So I give that a 2 star. Stability of updates...I'm giving that a 2 star too mostly due to the extra padding of useless junk they keep adding at the end of the chapter and also because it seems that no one checked if the port from GravityTales to Webnovel was okay or not. Story Development and Character Design, I'm giving both 1 star because there really isn't much of either. The MCs personality and such keeps getting contradicted so much that it makes me wonder if I should take the description of the MC by the author seriously. Side characters also are described in a way it seems like they'll have some personality to them but end up just bootlicking and scraping after the MC and become rather dull and similar. World background...nothing original really. It's also a 1 star because it's simply a mix of typical Xianxia with typical China. But on another note...I keep reading it. It's because of the tree sap.

_mer_F_Kibar
_mer_F_KibarLv1_mer_F_Kibar

This is my first comment. I dont read anytime like this piss of sh*t. This book have a lot of mistake. Like mc is not 10000 years old, mc just a kid, all carecters know just bullsh*t, f*ck the who gives this book five star. Have a nice day

CosmicS
CosmicSLv5CosmicS

this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................

Cienz
CienzLv5Cienz

I dont think the chapters were proofread after like the first few dozen. It is annoying how they put the signature at the end of each chapter but don't actually proofread.

Shadow0fSoul
Shadow0fSoulLv14Shadow0fSoul

Truth to spill, after reading few hundreds of chapters I started to pity Chinese people now I understand why all of them are so afraid and hateful of others to be surrounded by such environment where they sneer each other and always sniffs at other people business and judges even if this is novel and not reallife but there is no smoke if there is no fire. That shows with all these Chinese cliche's where they bite each other with no thinking. After only reading this did I understood why Buddhism was created there like I say if there is no disease there is no need for cure and as China was rotting from within it gave birth to Buddhism without it I can't even imagine what kind of fate it would have. As for main character it feels like it's average only when it's needed that expert like deity mentality shows up and it looks like that author forgets about it, yes ı understand when it's around friends and family but when he adventure's it feels like character developed but sadly the only development is degradation.. If I knew about this I truly wouldn't had wasted my time on this. But at least this opened my eyes about Chinese abuses they live through.

Palladian
PalladianLv14Palladian

I read till 930 chapter, and the story was good, till the plot armor happened so many times that I dropped it. Especially I hate that author makes side characters think like ancient people, were they consider race of a person first, and not the character. Like, yes, here we go again, every second villain is Japanese 😂 or American 😂. I dropped it than the Polish Magician summoned a tiger and a dragon(900+ chapter) First of all, he is a mage, not a daoist to summon a dragon. Secondly, where are NO FCKING TIGERS IN POLAND. At least make it realistic if you reflect real life cultures into your novel, western culture never worshipped tigers, dragons, snakes or some other eastern mythological creatures. It is stupid, imagine a cultivator casting spells from Warcraft, or witcher using daoist techniques. Also the mc clearly states that he is not interested in woman, yet he still makes a harem, and let females manipulate him into accepting them. Really, you are 10000 y.o., have some shame old pervert. Although I liked the plot, and how he made money, and also faceslapping was really nice. But if the novel was not filled with han-supremacy, it would be greater. It is 21st century, and you shouldn't think like a medieval barbarian, especially than writing a novel. So far 7.3/10 and f*ck chinese communist propaganda.

Yes_boss
Yes_bossLv5Yes_boss

A supreme being had died in the immortal world.....this is the title and I think mere looking at the title, it kinda pissed me off and I think ion like it.....................

Ayra
AyraLv5Ayra

YESS They uploaded it !! i waited for so long, they shouldn't have deleted the chapters on gravitytales before uploading it here, that's mean T.T Please keep up the translation, don't drop it >< Great novel by the way

ByAMountainOf
ByAMountainOfLv12ByAMountainOf

I made it to chapter 17. Translation quality seems totally fine. Unfortunately the story itself is so bad that I cannot continue. Basically the behaviour of the MC doesn't really match what a thousand year old monster would do, even though the author keeps bringing that up.

Crabble
CrabbleLv14Crabble

Basic anti Japanese novel by Chinese And the mc is a full blown retard he acts like a 8 yr old when he’s Supposedly 10000 yrs old+.

Saarlink
SaarlinkLv5Saarlink

I love the beginning of this novel. Read it more than once as I caught up to the chapters that had been translated. The MC is what I would like to see in an MC, kind but capable. He is not murdering people and their families (though later he does a bit of the stabby stabby but it is justified well and generally done in a clever rather than just evil way). I eventually stopped when the author decided to go a bit too overboard with his terrorist plot and have heard that the harem gets a bit out of control later on too. I solidly recommend the first 450 chapters or so of this novel as they are by far the best take on this situation I have read.

NefariousDagger
NefariousDaggerLv11NefariousDagger

this is bad that's depressing. this is pure garbage really . the backgroud is good but the author is a racist bast*** and the way the story evolve is just horrible.

darkjoker
darkjokerLv13darkjoker

****! 😭 i forgot which chapter i reached in this novel when it was at gravitytales. can someone tell me the chapter where the MC just got back from his island which he uses for raising animals, i remember he was still in his yacht. it was near chapter 600 i think. help me please 🙏

Vaerus
VaerusLv11Vaerus

MC meets extremely arrogant characters-> extremely arrogant characters challenge MC -> mc sandbags -> mc gets humiliated -> mc comes back and monologue mentions it was part of his plan because of his big brain -> mc faceslaps -> repeat that's the whole novel, do not read under any circumstance.

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