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Palladian
PalladianLv145yr
2019-12-01 21:27

I read till 930 chapter, and the story was good, till the plot armor happened so many times that I dropped it. Especially I hate that author makes side characters think like ancient people, were they consider race of a person first, and not the character. Like, yes, here we go again, every second villain is Japanese 😂 or American 😂. I dropped it than the Polish Magician summoned a tiger and a dragon(900+ chapter) First of all, he is a mage, not a daoist to summon a dragon. Secondly, where are NO FCKING TIGERS IN POLAND. At least make it realistic if you reflect real life cultures into your novel, western culture never worshipped tigers, dragons, snakes or some other eastern mythological creatures. It is stupid, imagine a cultivator casting spells from Warcraft, or witcher using daoist techniques. Also the mc clearly states that he is not interested in woman, yet he still makes a harem, and let females manipulate him into accepting them. Really, you are 10000 y.o., have some shame old pervert. Although I liked the plot, and how he made money, and also faceslapping was really nice. But if the novel was not filled with han-supremacy, it would be greater. It is 21st century, and you shouldn't think like a medieval barbarian, especially than writing a novel. So far 7.3/10 and f*ck chinese communist propaganda.

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Review of the first 15 chapters ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If someone were to live for 10 thousand years, then his actions would be very different from a normal human. Our MC supposedly lived that long and yet acts like kid, it's mentioned times how arrogant he was in his previous life and how strong willed he was and yet again act like a kid. Somewhere in the story he get kicked out of his class and he gets shocked, i don't see why a 10 thousand year old Being, who fully knew how bad he was performing and how his teachers hated him gets shocked by such decisions. His background is just for show and never really reflects on him. The story doesn't adds up, its like the author had bunch of ideas but didn't know how to stick them together so he just decided to mention all of them without making a relation.

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JulianneDragonhope
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Many mistakes while reading the story. Mostly grammatical but sometimes it's so bad that it makes the whole sentence have little to no meaning. So I give that a 2 star. Stability of updates...I'm giving that a 2 star too mostly due to the extra padding of useless junk they keep adding at the end of the chapter and also because it seems that no one checked if the port from GravityTales to Webnovel was okay or not. Story Development and Character Design, I'm giving both 1 star because there really isn't much of either. The MCs personality and such keeps getting contradicted so much that it makes me wonder if I should take the description of the MC by the author seriously. Side characters also are described in a way it seems like they'll have some personality to them but end up just bootlicking and scraping after the MC and become rather dull and similar. World background...nothing original really. It's also a 1 star because it's simply a mix of typical Xianxia with typical China. But on another note...I keep reading it. It's because of the tree sap.

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This is my first comment. I dont read anytime like this piss of sh*t. This book have a lot of mistake. Like mc is not 10000 years old, mc just a kid, all carecters know just bullsh*t, f*ck the who gives this book five star. Have a nice day

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this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................

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I dont think the chapters were proofread after like the first few dozen. It is annoying how they put the signature at the end of each chapter but don't actually proofread.

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