Reincarnation in DxD with wishes

Writing quality 2 stars its better then a translation but not by much. Update stability is 5 star it updates a lot. Story development is 3 stars its about a overpowered character with a harem its alright. Character design is 2 stars its alright most overpowered characters don't have a good character design. World background is 5 stars

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I will try to not drop it until I finish the story, so give me a review and motivate me. and I don't want to make this story a harem but if readers want a harem, who am I for denying it?

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The grammar is decent, which is the downside of most fanfics on this app. What I did notice in this story was the lack of character interactions, and when they did interact it came out forced, it even made me cringe sometimes. The concept is good, the story is pretty fast pace as of chapter 16(where I left off). Hopefully it is improved, I’ll probably come back again after trying out other fanfics on my list. Overall not a bad read if you have aren’t prone to second hand embarrassment like me from all the edgy and cringy moments.

Oh.. Turns out I haven't left a review yet... Well take this 5 stars from me!

this book has great potential keep it up author good job

This is so good I need a lot of chapters to read at least 2 a day or make the chapters longer

If you are expecting a harem themed smut filled fan service because DXD was in the title… sorry to disappoint. This is a story about a reincarnated guy growing overpowered and having fun changing things up and creating a little chaos. The protagonist is power hungry and distrustful of others. While little seems to be revealed about his background prior to reincarnation it is briefly mentioned that he was betrayed by his closest friends and family which seems to fuel his warped psyche and rapid ascension in strength. Personally, I don’t like the MC’s personality as it’s a little too apathetic for my taste… maybe a little too 2-dimensional as well. The author doesn’t seem very keen on creating close relationships with him and the romance, severely lacking as it is, pretty much revolves around platonic themes or takes place off script. Although he flirts and seduces many women it’s not actually skilled and the women he ‘collects’ are little more than devoted friends left forgotten in storage. At this point in the story he has been intimate with two women, both of the same exotic species and neither had any real romantic connection beforehand. Well… I liked it for the most part though it definitely has its share of flaws.

Great story. Don't know what else to say

Aku baru membaca beberapa bab, dan yah, kurangnya adalah interaksi dan percakapan antar karakter agak hambar, tapi aku akan terus membaca, kuharap ada perubahan.

i am currently at chapter 5 and it's already good!! hope this doesn't dropped!!

The story is great I'm at chapter 49 and can you make killer frost part of the harem and the killer frost is a dc villain and the her eyes and hair and ice blue

As this is a review so i will be straight to the points which I like about it or dislike somewhat ~ like ~ • it is pure wishfullment . • overpowered mc where power ranking can't truly define his power just like Noah osmath from infinite mana in apocalypse . • At the start I started to believe it was going to be masochist mc training fanfic but it turned for the better . • Fast pace which I can like just like a particular novel . • This novel does not exactly follow the themes which the majority of authors follow (at least for me ). • Author is also very engaging because of it makes it very likable . ~dislike somewhat ~ • As you progress it becomes harder for you to remember the sum of the characters, for a few people they might not like this trait.

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I don't know who write a preview a novel so here my innocent though MC is the time to work or manipulate to gain power not saying that's a bad thing, grammar is very good, it is part of this novel is that Author reacts to my comments really enjoy the interaction

Well DXD arc was filled with water but since it's author'' first novel I gave it a chance and I am not disappointed. THIS IS PURE GOLD WISH FULFILLMENT. Keep it up.

The moment I read Omniscient reader's viewpoint, mentioned in synopsis. I clicked on the add to library. I know, I am needing this book in my library. I will take my sweet time reading it. Keep on going author.

The character lack of interaction is noticable some conversations is confusing because some word is meaningless or not necessary for the sentence. But overall the quality is pretty good and i will give it just an OK out of 10 not the best not the worst either keep it up and fix the mistake pointed out by the reader and here's a meme because Idk what else to say

It’s an ok work just hard to get to get immersed with got to say first couple chapters are ruff had to skip most while just seeing him training in his room for the first couple chapters but I believe it would get better but even for a op mc he’s just too much at 4 and basically at super lvl or more im just following to see the character development because power wise it’s a waste to follow and when will you edit the first couple chapters?