One Piece: I'm Mihawk's Son

here you go bro............................

Female Mihawk is grooming her husband. What could be better?

The MC (10) engages in sexual acts with his adoptive mother (who is 25+) and Hancock and her sisters, who at this point would also be around 10.

Good idea for the novel but character design is horrible , mc is 40 years old but he acts like a kid and crys like one to , he created something ahead of it's time which means he has a really high iq but somehow he can't notice something such as his driver is betraying him, and he keep acting like a kid ia really throwing me off , it's a pity the novel had a nice idea but destroyed by such mc, i hope he gets good character development at least, and will you add mihawk to the harem or not?

Tampilkan spoiler

-The grammar is amazing, barely any error and the sentences are well structured, its one of this fics strongest points. ---- -Updates: Very often, also one of this fic's strongest points. ---- -Story: It was amazing until around chapter 25, but then the priority went from getting "stronger" into taking care of his favorite characters at the cost of his own freedom basically, he bound himself to an area just to get three women into his harem. Basically, an adult in a child body since he was three, yet he is basically having sexual exploits with his "adoptive" mother since the age of 7. I ended up stopping to read this fic after chapter 54, due to the fact the flawed logic to write a forced lemon got out of hand: Three young girls that has been under captivity for years, being exposed to horrors in slavery, no doubt sexual in nature, all of a sudden wants to "do it" with the 10 year old mc?" Nah. ---- -Character Design: Mihawk and the MC was something very fresh, the MC developed a concept of haki then all of a sudden it turns out every important figure that has died in the past conveniently had it... Like Gol D Roger, Joy boy, and I would assume the world government by now. It was a very good idea, but destroying everything that made the MC unique was... not a good idea. ---- -World Background: Its the one piece world, it's an amazing world overall, so there's not really much to say there. ---- Overall, it was a great read, but when it became a harem collection generator I decided to stop reading, either way the author writes very solid fics and I felt myself grow as a fresh author myself after reading his works. Keep it up author! :)

well another one bites the dust, it was a good journey till it lasted we poor folk can't do patreon since you stopped updating here this is where we part ways Gluck on future ventures author.

What's the point of making harem if it doesn't make sense. After all of that we only get plain characters. It's just a bad writing. The story is good, but it could've been a lot better without harem. What's even worse is that all his girls are pedo, might say something about the author.

Sandro Alves de Oliveira, this is the name of the Brazilian who invented a motorcycle engine powered by water, this creation had national repercussions, was shown on TV and so on. shortly after he disappears, without explanation, no one knows what happened to him...

Tampilkan spoiler

The main character reincarted, was a grown a*s man 40+ years old yet he acts more immature than a five year old. Was in a fight with Garp at a severe disadvantage and refused to use his power to manipulate gravity which he has shown he can do. Anytime a woman pops up he turns into Sanji. Was described as this genius character yet he has not yet shown any of that intelligence in any way shape or form. Trained for two years and because he was said to be vice admiral class yet he expected to be able to slap around everyone purely because he was trained by Mihawk. I can go on and on about all the things wrong with this MC. He’s completely insufferable.

I liked. Nothing to criticize at the moment. I would like to know when will release more?.........................,....................................................................

What is the poetic need to make a harem? Leaving that aside, seeing the MC's hypocritical attitude makes me sick. Besides there are already tons of much better One Piece and harems.

a fantasy of a teenager driven by salary, the boy will make a harem at 7 years old where his mother is a fantasy of a teenager driven by salary, the boy will make a harem at 7 years old where his mother is

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Was interested but when I read the character index where mc is 15 with 5 billion bounty and how many wifes he has plus the titles and devil fruits which conveniently are op and reading a few chapters, I gave up

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ooo the horror. this is what happens whens fans love a character too much. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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lost interest. boa killed doffy but was defeated by sugar and became hostage by kaido 😂 too many pov that not necessaries. got me confused.became strong to be politicians 😂😂

mc is 10 and he is building harem... there are kids in it as well ofc so 1 star + report but doubt that report will do anything