As much as I'd like to say that is a valid point... It is not, could he defeat the strongest Jonin shortly after finishing the academy? Did he even know any jutsu other than shadow clone at the same age? Did he even train before the plot began? Nope. The only reason that is, is due to comedy relief and a later use for when he was "Recognized" by the people and such.

Another fic that doesn't know that Devils and demons are entirely different races within the dxd verse. Zzzzz

And you shouldn't as she is used as a glorified plot device to develop the main character.

Ahh, yes, defeat one if not the strongest Jonin in the village, and a promotion to that exact rank is considered unfair to others... I get it; you don't want to push the MC so far up the totem pole you can't see him anymore, but the logic you are using is flawed to the point of stupidity. I also get that this is somewhat of a crackfic due to the fact that the young student body can simply watch a duel versus the village elite like that of a game of sports when they are, in reality, Ninjas who do not need to constantly show off like some sort of dog participating in contests.

Probably no consequence, as the setting of every character is like that of an NPC nodding to the MC's whim at every turn.

Proof-reading is weak with this one.

It's most likely Grammarly's auto-correct, as "Petra" is a female name, which was most popular around the 60s or 70s. And I guess the correction software registers it to be so as well.

I've read the first 18 chapters, and I have to say that it's getting better and better. The fic is unique and has been well-paced up to now. The grammar is excellent, but there are a few typos here and there and perhaps a small mistake or two regarding structure, which by itself is great. The MC's abilities are growing to be more unique as the chapters go by, he is leaning toward the more overpowered side of things, but that is to be expected due to his "Wish". Overall, the fic is great, I'm looking forward to more.

Quality = OK-ish. There are plenty of typos and odd sentence structures in the majority of the chapters up to chapter 17. It's understandable, yes, but it's dumbed down so much that every logical action is replaced by the whimsical stereotype of the typical shonen protagonist who wants to bang his sister for some god-for-sake reason. -Stability: Ok. Story Development: There's lots to say about that, but it's mainly summarized in how I described the quality of the fic. Each chapter gives him a magnificent power boost, but the MC never improves. His actions grow dumber and dumber the further in you get. -Character Design: Meh, MC acts like he's afraid to go out the front door in fear of being crushed by almighty entities. -World Background: Cool, MC's world is DC, yet what does that mean? Oh, here's a random ass quest to go to a random world, almost like his chat group's worlds doesn't exist, and he has to cover grounds in a world that comes out of absolutely nowhere. Overall, this fanfic is overrated and does not belong in the top charts where it currently is. The plot is a lazy amalgamation of mixed-mashed worlds, and the author can't nail a single original character personality. They all go along like it is an acid-induced dreamscape where the MC collects his harem of useless nobodies because he needs to collect women en masse. -Harsh? Nah, especially not when the author wants to get paid for this drivel through p@treon.

And don't forget the fact that his AI already has "Conquered" the interwebs, so to say, and can gather blackmail on one of the richest individuals on his planet while securing him a massive amount of wealth to help secure himself if he only used 0,000001% of "Tony's" overall IQ.

"Immunity" be like:

...Hacked the internet? Seriously? Why would anyone need to "Hack" the internet?

Then what stops you from instead changing it from "older brother" to sibling? :P

I had to leave a review after seeing so many people take this fanfiction so personally when it reached the top lists. -Writing Quality: Simply amazing. The storytelling is so smooth and mixes well with the characters. There are no typos, and the sentence structuring is top-notch. It is legit one of the top fics on this entire platform in terms of quality. -Updates: Quite often, considering how long the chapters are. -Story Development: From chapter 1 to chapter 39, there's been a constant development among the characters; personalities clash and make the comedy fit so much better. -Character Design: I'd say this is the author's best quality. There are so many different characters, and even if they might not be canonically accurate at times, you get to see dozens of personalities improve and actually turn a bad time into a good time due to the MC's quirks. -Overall, I think the hate this fic gets is unjustified, especially so when "tastes" in a relationship are the crux of the so-called hate. It's a goddamn fanfic, not an offense to a non-existent love life. -Especially so when people tend to look so hard into things that they actually take shit personally. Just skip the R18 chapters if it hurts your ego so much...

I already feel good about this fic. An author with good taste knows to shy away from such a nightmare-fueled reality such as all the consuming ching chong!

I think the bot had a stroke?

So... ChatGPT is hard at work huh...

His grandfather seems to be one of those bullshido grandmasters on youtube, however, he's just a normal soldier who became intimate with the avatar and suddenly got spirit cancer...

He's one of those... you know, those nasty basement-lurking harem fanatics who believe that a relationship like a harem represents just "Works"