here you go bro............................

Female Mihawk is grooming her husband. What could be better?

The MC (10) engages in sexual acts with his adoptive mother (who is 25+) and Hancock and her sisters, who at this point would also be around 10.

Good idea for the novel but character design is horrible , mc is 40 years old but he acts like a kid and crys like one to , he created something ahead of it's time which means he has a really high iq but somehow he can't notice something such as his driver is betraying him, and he keep acting like a kid ia really throwing me off , it's a pity the novel had a nice idea but destroyed by such mc, i hope he gets good character development at least, and will you add mihawk to the harem or not?

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-The grammar is amazing, barely any error and the sentences are well structured, its one of this fics strongest points. ---- -Updates: Very often, also one of this fic's strongest points. ---- -Story: It was amazing until around chapter 25, but then the priority went from getting "stronger" into taking care of his favorite characters at the cost of his own freedom basically, he bound himself to an area just to get three women into his harem. Basically, an adult in a child body since he was three, yet he is basically having sexual exploits with his "adoptive" mother since the age of 7. I ended up stopping to read this fic after chapter 54, due to the fact the flawed logic to write a forced lemon got out of hand: Three young girls that has been under captivity for years, being exposed to horrors in slavery, no doubt sexual in nature, all of a sudden wants to "do it" with the 10 year old mc?" Nah. ---- -Character Design: Mihawk and the MC was something very fresh, the MC developed a concept of haki then all of a sudden it turns out every important figure that has died in the past conveniently had it... Like Gol D Roger, Joy boy, and I would assume the world government by now. It was a very good idea, but destroying everything that made the MC unique was... not a good idea. ---- -World Background: Its the one piece world, it's an amazing world overall, so there's not really much to say there. ---- Overall, it was a great read, but when it became a harem collection generator I decided to stop reading, either way the author writes very solid fics and I felt myself grow as a fresh author myself after reading his works. Keep it up author! :)

well another one bites the dust, it was a good journey till it lasted we poor folk can't do patreon since you stopped updating here this is where we part ways Gluck on future ventures author.

What's the point of making harem if it doesn't make sense. After all of that we only get plain characters. It's just a bad writing. The story is good, but it could've been a lot better without harem. What's even worse is that all his girls are pedo, might say something about the author.

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