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Omnitrix In MCU

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RJ was just an ordinary high school student who loved Marvel movies, hanging out with his friends, and occasionally breaking the rules to catch the latest blockbuster. But one reckless decision—to bunk class and watch Avengers: Endgame—set off a chain of events he never could have imagined. What starts as a thrilling day out ends in disaster when a truck, driven by a bizarre, godlike figure claiming to be “Yam,” plows into RJ. Instead of waking up in a hospital, RJ finds himself in a hellish realm of fire and lava, face-to-face with the eccentric deity who accidentally claimed his life. Now, to make amends for the mix-up, the god offers RJ a deal: reincarnation into a new life, with his memories intact at age 15, and the power to choose one artifact from the multiverse. Without thinking, RJ blurts out the legendary Omnitrix. Thrown into a new world with the ultimate alien-shifting device at his fingertips, RJ must navigate the challenges of his second life. Can he master the power of the Omnitrix and uncover the secrets of this new world, or will his second chance come with even greater risks than his first? Find out in this thrilling blend of reincarnation, action, and multiverse madness where one fanboy’s dreams come true—but at a cost he never saw coming. (Its my First time writing so plz support me)

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Chapter 1Chapter 1: The Day It All Changed

"Class is over. The next class starts in five minutes," announced our homeroom teacher.

I sighed with relief, slouching in my chair.

"RJ!" My best friend nudged me. "The teacher's gone! Let's go before the next one comes in!"

I grinned and stood up. "Is it finally happening?"

"Yes, man! Let's go!"

Me and my three friends quickly got up from our bench, trying to make as little noise as possible. But as we made our way to the door, our classmates started noticing us.

"Faster, guys! Or we'll miss the movie," I whispered urgently.

Yes, we were bunking class. For what, you ask? A movie. Not just any movie—Marvel's Avengers: Endgame.

Today was the day. The culmination of ten years of Marvel movies. Getting tickets was next to impossible, especially here in India, where Infinity War made Marvel explode in popularity. But somehow, we managed it.

"Man, that movie was incredible," my friend said as we exited the theater.

"Incredible? It was a blockbuster!" I replied. "That snap...it broke me."

"Yeah, bro," my other friend chimed in, still wiping his eyes. "But what's next? Iron Man's gone. Who's going to take his place?"

"Maybe his daughter?" I suggested. "Who knows? Anyway, I'm grabbing my bike. Bring something to eat. I'll wait outside."

As I stood by my bike, I saw a truck speeding toward me. For a moment, I froze. The driver was yelling something weird:

"Yam ha ham! Yam ha ham!"

What the heck? Was he cosplaying as a god? He had horns on his head and everything.

"Is this guy for real?" I muttered.

Before I could react, the truck hit me.

When I opened my eyes, everything around me was red. Pools of lava bubbled everywhere, and the heat was suffocating.

"Hey, mortal!" a voice boomed.

I whipped my head left and right, trying to find the source.

"Up here, idiot!"

I looked up and saw him—the guy who had slammed a truck into me. He was lounging on a floating chair, sipping something through a straw, with a pair of goggles on his eyes.

"You!" I shouted, still in shock.

He waved dismissively. "Shut your mouth, or something might fly into it."

"Why did you kill me? Was my time up?" I blurted, my brain struggling to process everything.

"Eh, not really," he said casually. "It was your friend's time, actually. But I came a bit early and hit you by mistake. You were just supposed to end up in the hospital."

I stared at him blankly.

"Is my friend safe?" I asked, hoping for good news.

The so-called god shrugged. "Nope. After I realized my mistake, I took a U-turn and hit him, too. Can't have a bad record, you know."

"ARE YOU SERIOUS?!"

"Yep. It happens," he said nonchalantly.

"So…where is he now?"

"Already on his way to the next life."

"And me? What's going to happen to me?"

"Well, since it was my mistake, I'll compensate you."

"Compensate? Does that mean I'll go back?"

"Nah, that's impossible."

I groaned. "Then what?"

"I'll throw you into reincarnation," he said. "You'll retain your memories, starting from age 15. As a bonus, I'll let you pick one artifact from the multiverse. Any artifact you want."

I blinked. "Wait...there's a multiverse?"

"Obviously. Now hurry up and pick. I don't have all day."

My mind raced. Any artifact from the multiverse? The possibilities were endless. But there was one thing—one legendary object—that popped into my head.

"The Omnitrix," I blurted out.

"Done," he said instantly.

"Wait, what do you mean 'done'?!"

Before I could argue, everything went black.

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Great Story idea, the development direction is good but the execution was poor, you are trying to rush things way too fast, the time it would take for an app to become popular, is generally much longer than three days without constant advertising, it would probably take a year or two. That time could be then dedicated towards other things like character development, or maybe his struggles before he got money, how, and what he is learning, perhaps everyday life, also I feel like reports wouldn’t just show up a some kids door without a good reason. 1 they know nothing about him, 2 even if they did know everything about him, they would need to apply to thier company for them to do interviews. Now on to the good stuff: the protagonist, although he doesn’t feel quite human, he has a more standard human morality (don’t you guys go bullshitting in the comments oh I wouldn’t steal, trust me most people if they had those powers would use them to benefit themselves, although they wouldn’t outright start doing whatever they would want, they would at least start with some small but negligible crimes) as I was saying although the protagonist doesn’t quite feel human he has what I would consider a normal moral compass not some hero or villian complex, with a complete hard on for Tony Stark (a little Tony glazing but you know in most marvels stories it is impossible for authors not to glaze Tony, that is just how marvel in general is). So Overall Story is great idea, awful pacing, below average execution. 4/10

Melegant
MelegantLv12

Thi could have been better I'm still not caught up but I don't think i will. it started great but than there is a bunch of shit happening. first thing first bro makes an ai casually mention it and his parents are ok and it's never developed but that actually something I can somehow even look past. the problem is when the secretary gets introduced that whole chapter is super made by ai it looks like bro became a Chinese author from the description and he continuously repeat himself and like the chapter after we see this 24+ years old woman blushing because a scrawny 14 years old boy complimented her.............. bullshit romance that's complety unrealistic and it's sick as fuck after all the mc is the same age as his previous life and so it's mentally and physical ficking pedophilic but some people would not mind cause the older one is a woman and even for me who's a man that's disgusting as fuck. For some this might be small things but I ain't staying when an author doesn't even put the effort to try come up with the dialogues by himself and uses AI, I would have rather read some awkward interaction where you see the author is inexperienced than totally AI made one with all the "measured and purposefull" adjectives for the jade beauty type description where a kid looks intellectual and charming when he's wearing fucking clothes like everybody fucking else. Overall I think my review score is very generous. By the I really like the first few chapters if the author could have stayed on that track it would have been better I would still try read some more to see if it gets at least back on that track. so author pls if you ever read this consider rewriting those chapters completely

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