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I Hide And Farm In The World Of Cultivation To Increase My Proficiency

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Lu Yuan crossed into the world of immortal cultivation and obtained [Skill Panel]. He was well aware of the level of danger in the world of immortal cultivation. [Sword-ridden skill reaches LV.10. Please choose the direction of advancement...] [Obtained advanced skill - Ride the Wind Royal Sword Technique: Double the speed of Royal Sword] [Reaching LV.10 in Breath Convergence Technique, please choose the direction of advancement...] [Obtained advanced skill - Aether Turtle Breath Concealment Technique: Double the effect of breath concealment] [Disguise skill reached LV.10. Please choose the direction of advancement...] [Obtain advanced skill - Disguise: Adjust your face muscles to achieve a perfect disguise effect] The so-called immortal cultivation was to see who lived longer! Killing the enemy was not something to brag about, but living was. Running fast, being good at hiding, looking ordinary... were the posture of the immortal emperor! Lu Yuan: I came to the immortal cultivation world only to do three things. Live long, live long, and live a godda*n long life. "Only those who are alive... are worthy of cultivating." "What, you talk to me about ghost immortals? A bunch of evil b*stards. Get out of here!" Steady immortal cultivation: afraid to die, so I maximized my defensive abilities.

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D_Wolf
D_WolfLv1

The first of the new batch that I have read. This one is interesting. We have the concept of luck that all protagonists seem to have in abundance. This is not saying that the author creates several different options giving each a value based and weights chance based on luck. Then rolls a dice to determine the outcome. No the authors arbitrarily assign seemingly impossible positive lucky events over and over again to most protagonists. In this story instead of going that route, we have the protagonist getting a lucky trait that allows him to improve his overall luck as well as to leverage his luck towards increasing the odds of unlikely events occurring. From improving the success rate of various procedures to improving the likelihood of a low probability event that improves his bodies talent permanently. We start off with this guy transmigrating into a somewhat precarious situation in he is in a female disciples room when she then brings her fiance to break their engagement. His presence offends the powerful male and the female now has him on a leash as she is who now provides protection from the male. Normally this would not be all that bad, except that our MC also has a 'system' style interface that allows him to see himself and others. Hers shows that she must be a spy and a demonic cultivator wanting to use him as a cauldron. Fortunately for our MC he is able to steel a certain amount of 'luck value' from those who create some sort of misfortune for him. With this ability his involvement with the demonic female cultivator is not a terrible thing at least not on the short term, as her use of him does not cause him permanent damage at least for now. From this point he goes and joins the alchemy division of the sect. This allows him to fully leverage his luck manipulation talent to build himself up in preparation for separating himself from the female demonic cultivator. From this point forward he is working on his skills, talent, and cultivation level for the next several years. The female leaves after 4 months of using him, which allows him to work on his own cultivation while leveraging his luck to help him. Her being a demonic cultivator he is afraid that if he improves his root talent without some sort of potential cause she mite be able to sense the change and get suspicious. Overall from my perspective I love this story. He is not a protagonist character who has amazing luck where everything is automatically going to go his way. Instead the concept of him manipulating his luck in non-consumable ways satisfies me as a reader.

Manjuan
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JustPassingBy
JustPassingByLv5

I give this story about average 4 star, and 1 star in updating stability. Why only in updating? Because this story is already dropped by the author. There's no ending in here, albeit story up to the latest is still interesting enough to read for me. The last chapter is chapter 276 (in chinese)Here is the prove of author dropping this:New book released: "Cultivating Immortal Path Starting from Getting Married"Sigh, I think many of you might have noticed last month that I really couldn't continue writing this book. In fact, a long time ago, I hit a wall while writing this book. A big part of the reason was my own arrogance. I thought I could write while also coming up with the outline. But in reality, writing without an outline is just suicidal; I can't write a single word. After all, it's impossible to maintain a good writing state every day; there are times when my mind goes blank. And once that happens, it triggers a chain reaction. So even though the new book is just being released now, I actually started working on the outline and setting it up last month.Originally, I thought I would just come up with an ending for this book, but I really don't know what to write anymore. I can only say that the beginning of this book was indeed good, but I didn't manage it well. For the new book, I won't make this kind of arrogant mistake again. Sigh, I won't say much more, afraid of being scolded by everyone. The new book, "Cultivating Immortal Path Starting from Getting Married," was inspired by "Furious Speed," and it's kind of a fantasy version of it. If you like it, you can give it a read. I'm sorry, and I bow my head in apology! Ozr!!!You may notice a familiar title, I think that one is Eternal Life Begins with Taking Wife, also in here. Why I gave that much rating, my gratitude toward the author for this story (the 4 star one)

sinkingship
sinkingshipLv14

I've read up to c353, so this novel can be considered alright just based on that. It kept me engaged enough to read that far and the translation is mostly decent throughout. Of course, there are a few erogious errors - for example, I really really wish whoever is editing this novel ran a find and replace on "shapeshift" and just replaced every single instance of that word with "Dharma Idol", since that's clearly what's being referred to - but I digress. The basic plot is that there's a guy in a sect and he secretly cultivates super-OP powers to get stronger. The bombastic opening involves him arriving in his transmigrated body and finding himself in a woman's bedroom and being told to hide from her angry lover. It's a fun opening gambit but, unfortunately, the rest of the book fails to live up to that opening. I would say that the first 100~ chapters of the book are well-plotted out, extremely coherent, and enjoyable to read. Then from chapter 100-240(ish) the book is a series of singular events that are strung together into a barely coherent whole that is still more or less enjoyable to read, but the cracks have begun to show. Finally, past chapter 240, the book starts to come apart at the seams as the author forgets about earlier plot threads and begins throwing in all sorts of events in between massive timeskips (for example, one day the MC decides to randomly invent and propagate smartphones amongst cultivators, leading to an unrealistically good outcome where he becomes the wealthiest man ever and the whole cultivation world calms down and become more peaceful because they want to browse forums and play not-League of Legends on their not-smartphones). The whole farce lasts about 30~ chapters, including 2 chapters where some rando is livingstreaming his ghost-hunting so we can get the full urban cultivation novel experience - at least for a few chapters before the author forgets about it and never mentions it again. The book (poorly) apes better novels with "steady" main characters. At times it really feels like a bad knock-off of books like "My Senior Brother Is Too Steady" or "Top Tier Providence, Secretly Cultivate for a Thousand Years". Too many plot threads just get dropped, go nowhere, or even get randomly retconned to make the story flow, especially when he transitions from the "Lower Realm" to the "Upper Realm". After he breaks through to the nascent soul realm the entire process of him going to the Upper Realm is completed in two chapters, with zero closure for any of the people or things in the Lower Realm. There's no scene where he bids farewell to his master or sect master, and like two paragraphs where it's explained how he randomly brushes off the women who were in his life up to that point. The woman who he sleeps with in Chapter 1 was clearly supposed to be important to the story at one point. He has a long-standing relationship with her during the first 100 chapters of the book, including multiple brief POV switches to her perspective which give the reader some insight into her nefarious plans - but all of that gets thrown in the trash and she gets a "new" backstory during the "ascending to the Upper Realm" arc so that her cultivation level and aspirations can barely keep up with MC. It really feels like a massive retcon when it happens, but she's barely even in the story anymore by the time it all gets "revealed" so it's hard to get too upset. I think that's my biggest problem with this story. The author really failed to keep the interesting elements of the story in the freaking story. MCs cheat was thoroughly and carefully explained in the early chapters, and it was engaging to watch him painstakingly grind out his proficiencies in various skills and be rewarded, but the system all but disappears after chapter 100 or so. Sure, it's still there, but the detailed explanations are gone and 99% of the time when it gets mentioned it's just because MC is using it as an "Appraisal" tool. At the start of the story, MC makes a big deal of using the System to collect Luck and raise his spiritual root aptitude, but both of those stats disappear around the time he hits the Golden Core Realm, in a way where it more feels like the author forgot about them as opposed to the author willingly deciding to phase them out of the story. The same can also be said of pretty much every side character. The first 100 chapters were the most fun to read because MC had various relationships to maintain - with his senior brother, with his master, with the sect master, with a handful of women, etc... - but they all more or less disappear later on. Some of them also go to the Upper Realm, but even so they're still pretty much out of the story. After reading other reviews I found that this novel was dropped by the author, and I think it's obvious why. At any rate, my final verdict is that the early part of the novel are an alright read, and I don't really regret reading as much as I did, but it's a shame how things went downhill.

Devil51
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